This is really cool! And the baby is dart's, right?

Hilarious. You, my friend, have talent. I loved the ending, with who became the Black Burst Dragoon. And I still love the random cuts to Albert and Emille.

I am amused and delighted. And also the image of Albert doting on Emile makes me squee.

I love, love, love it. It actually made me lol, just so's you know. So you should definitely write more ASAP. I especially appreciate how it is well written (love the details) and appears to be really thought out. Oh, and I loved the random cuts to Albert. Those made me laugh the hardest.

I love the fact that Dart, on his way to stop a potential fight, -starts- a fight. Yep, this one might be worth reading. I'll wait for the next chp. :)

lol! it is really funny!