OMG he came in his pants *dies from hotness*

Cool story had a lot of lol moments too smiles XD.

Uhmm..i'm curious about something though...i'm not from America so I don't know if that's the way or not but anyways, I noticed that at some of the things you have e.g. "They were sat eating..."It sounds funny so just pm me with that answer when you have the time but otherwise awesome story. I loved it and i'm so eager to get to the sequel that I almost skipped this chapter. Glad I didn't tho...

**Sweets**

I thought most people only caught the chicken pox once, though it is possible to catch it the second time but its really uncommon. Aside from that, very interesting first chapter, can't wait to read what happens next.

omg I loved this story so much! thanks for writing it! D

You changed POV midway through the chapter, I'm pretty sure. it's somwhere around:

"You left me to suffer under your mums' gaze because of your friend."

"You left me to take the blame for something you did, and now your cousin thinks I'm some sort of gay freak!"

*SWITCH RIGHT HERE*

"Well you are some sort of gay freak anyway!" I don't know why, but I think I went a bit too far.

"Don't lump me in the same category as you, Hyuuga!" he stands, pure anger written on his face. Ok, now I know I went too far.

It's rather confusing. By the way, I love this story, and this is about my twentieth time reading it. :D

Oh, a few chapters back (not quite sure which one), you said 'patients' when you meant 'patience'.

however, aside from the random spelling errors every once in a while, I can't really find anything to offer criticism on. You are a fabulous writer, and i love this story.

-Shikamaru roxs my soxs

I read this story before and I'm not sure if I left a review or not... But anywayz I just got done rereading it and I just wanted to say is that I LOVE IT! It was great My fave ch. is when Neji was dressed up like a maid. XD

Anywayz... you should check out some of my stories even though I haven't updated ost of them... I'm getting there

though... Awesome story! 5/5 stars! 33

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i love this story.

good i the last chapter had me so fucking worried T.T

i was so scared that neji was going to die.

hahah i have been bugging my friends from telling them funny bits from the story.

i like the maids outfit bestt :P

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This is a really great story. very cute. This last chapter was a great finish!

-NOSEBLEED- Kawaii Couple! Really like it AND it's sort of not that OOC... 'cept the fact that Neji gets thrown out...

4/5

LixxyChan

OMG! its was so funny! heheheh, your story rocked the socks off ! (sorry for the randomness) it was reali good ;)

I like this couple a lot and I also love your story. It was funny and real at the same time. Brilliant work, I love it! thanks for the great story!

Here's a really long review. The only thing that threw me off was the spelling. But it's ok everyone makes mistakes and it didnt really take away from the over all story. I liked the plot, the ending was perfect. It had the perfect mix of drama and fluff and humor and smut. This was just so good I don't think I can leave a decent review even. This is my second time reaing this, and it was wonderfull both was just amazing. Yhis was the story that made me love ShikaNeji. I think I mention it in my profile, lol. But anyway, this was fantastic, and now I'm off the read the sequel!

that was too good. .

you spell A LOT of words wrong...

chap. 9

why did you do that in the end? i actually don't wanna know.