God, the potential in this story, plus your other bits, to spin into something massive and fantastic that will EAT the fandom . . . *shakes head*

So. *evil grin* Have I tempted you into writing that story, yet? 'cause, y'know, it would _rule_. Epicness and stuff. Awesome!

Funny and angsty and mysterious... All the things a SN fan fic should be. And a very interesting twist!

He, this was so cool. I liked it!

wow, I loved this! I love the hints in this. I really really want Dean to have some connection to this supernatural story, rather then just being Sam's protector/brother, so I really loved this!

LOVED the story. Being a Deangirl, I like to think that this thing is not really about Sammy. Now, if only Kripke listened to us... ;)

Keep writing, I can't wait for more!

story of his life!

Jade

"You are the eldest—you are strongest, you cannot fall, and there is no line you would not cross to keep him safe. Everything else is inconsequential"

That has got to be my favourite part of this whole fic. :) Thank you for sharing.

Haven’t you ever read a fairytale boy? … ah, got your attention now, huh? Sit down. – that’s a good boy

“Woof.”

It figures Dean would sit up straight at the mention of fairy tales and groan at a quote that mentioned "Heaven." Weaving both the pattern of the oldest son from those tales and how young men should listen to old women they meet was a nice idea that added a great layer to this.

I am also an equal opportunity Winchester lover, and I like the idea that Dean might be special as well. Because there is no boundry Dean wouldn't cross for Sam, and some of those lines are there for a reason. What a great fic.

Oh, I like Ava.

Oh I like that, but I'm a Deangirl. :)

No, really though. That's a very interesting take on things. I like it.

Kudos.

Okay Im with Dean why cant the freaky woman just come out and say what she means. Tell me if this is right cause the woman confused me too. The things go after Sam to get to Dean but he cant fall so they are screwed but they still try by taking out Sam. Now if thats not circular thinking I dont know what is. It was really good.

Funny and quite true; interesting idea!