this was really good, update soon!

WOT! KAWAI! FAV! FAV! FAV KILLING ORO-SENNIN SCENE EVER!

Oro-sennin = Ero-sennin

aha! now thts how i think it SHOULD end! with the girls kickin @$$! i love the irony. it would b rele funny if sum unexpected person ends up killing him like...idk...chouji? lol

Love it. *Grins*

this is really good... awesome sakura killed him... is this all or is there more?

tht was kool! haha orochimaru! thts wat u get! will there b more 2 the story?