| 12/28/08 . chapter 1 I really loved this, very well-written.
You really fleshed out both characters nicely.
I kept thinking that Angela had a thing for Jan with all that inspection. I'm not sure if that was your intention, but I enjoyed it.
I loved your portrayal of Jan as fragile.
I've always felt bad for her.
I've always found Angela's concentration on other women's clothing and calling (what I could call) modest clothing whorish, odd. Especially concerning Pam. I always thought Angela would end up being a lesbian on the show, but it never happened. Especially with that cat obsession. It seemed ripe for jokes.
I think it would be interesting to do an Angela/Jan pairing.
Alone, writing the reactions for Dwight and Micheal would be priceless.
I don't know what more to say. I really loved this. |