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Reviews for: Wanton Faux Professionalism
12/28/08 . chapter 1
I really loved this, very well-written.

You really fleshed out both characters nicely.

I kept thinking that Angela had a thing for Jan with all that inspection. I'm not sure if that was your intention, but I enjoyed it.

I loved your portrayal of Jan as fragile.

I've always felt bad for her.

I've always found Angela's concentration on other women's clothing and calling (what I could call) modest clothing whorish, odd. Especially concerning Pam. I always thought Angela would end up being a lesbian on the show, but it never happened. Especially with that cat obsession. It seemed ripe for jokes.

I think it would be interesting to do an Angela/Jan pairing.

Alone, writing the reactions for Dwight and Micheal would be priceless.

I don't know what more to say. I really loved this.
Aurora West 12/24/06 . chapter 1
I think you wrote Angela well! :)
12/24/06 . chapter 1
Nice! I liked the Catholic bit too. totaly Angela!
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