Reviews for The vault
aliesterus chapter 15 . 7/26
Despite Synthasia being potentially(eh, only maybe) better than this, I think this is good enough to stand on its own two feet, so I lobby for this fic to be reinstated as its own page again.
More Musher chapter 5 . 7/15
This is a good one, too. Too short, though.
More Musher chapter 2 . 7/15
I would LOVE to see more of this. This is great.
tarrangar chapter 15 . 4/21
What story is it that you deem a better version of this? because this is just amazing.
tarrangar chapter 12 . 4/20
Really wish Ranma had killed the whole Amazon council, would have served them right, should also have killed all who he found out knew about what was done to him, and should have pissed on Mousse and Shampoo's graves.

Of course he shouldn't have done that immediately, need to adjust and everything first, but I wish he would have made that his secret goal.
tarrangar chapter 2 . 4/20
Do you just edit the chapters to add a new page? If yes then that don't seem a very good idea, since it means that we can't see that you have written more of that story.
Gary Go chapter 19 . 4/10
Got some wonderful ideas here.
r.rocha99913 chapter 19 . 3/17
You just, this is...
GAH! Why must you hook me in to these stories so well?! First the Eva fic, which was amazing on its own, and now this?! Come on, man! I find myself simultaneously wanting to punch you in the face for leaving it as is, and wanting to beg you to continue the story.

Keep the stories coming, please. We need more.
Richard Ryley chapter 19 . 3/13
Well, this is an interesting concept. If one of your "pokes" is the fanon that Akane keeps challenging people who defeat her and never tries to get any better, maybe Umi doesn't realize she doesn't have anyone to train her. And Akane's attitude towards Umi wasn't spiteful, she seemed concerned about her. So perhaps there could be a friendship there, assuming Umi can wrap her head around the idea that the person she believes to be her father intended for her to marry Akane.

Umi also reminds me physically of Ukyo, which is who I originally thought she might be. I have also typed her name several times when trying to type Umi here. :D

So what exactly is the connection between Umi and Ranma? Unless he was cursed at seven, it doesn't make sense that the personality transfer would be in any way related to Jusenkyo. So maybe it was a curse of a different sort? Or perhaps a result of the Neko-Ken training? I'll note that Nabiki would not be all that surprised at the idea of a girl claiming to be a boy, since that's what just happened with Ranma. She might consider it too much of a coincidence that Ranma has a curse that turns him into a girl, and a girl who believes herself to be him.

The very idea of a female version of Ranma being the sister of Tatewaki and Kodachi is in and of itself hilarious. It could definitely be interesting.
keichan2 chapter 19 . 3/13
Interesting…
I really wonder what happened!
I would really rove to read more of this!
Compucles chapter 19 . 3/13
Well, this is pretty weird, for lack of a better term. I wonder what happened to poor Ranma (as well as poor Umi, the girl she was originally).

I take it the imposter is Ukyo with a Nannichuan curse? I've actually read another story where Genma and Ukyo pulled a similar stunt after Genma seemingly lost Ranma as a child. Although, in that case, they had the foresight to (initially) lock the curse with the locking ladle while "Ranma" wound up happily engaged to Nabiki.
shugokage chapter 19 . 3/12
Interesting story idea and it sounds like a cool full story for the future!
Rogue7 chapter 19 . 3/12
Definitely an interesting spin on the tale, could get crazier than normal (in the Ranma definition of course)
If your muse permits you to continue...
Talzin chapter 18 . 2/20
An interesting beginning to be sure. Reminds me a bit of Angelic Layer which was a fun little story itself though after taking a moment to check I do see there is basically a Gundam version of that now which I will probably need to check out.
Bitjama chapter 18 . 2/19
i like this too, i wouldn't mind Ranma, Hiro and Dai going on to the buld fighters championship, with the two going full otaku and Ranma having absolutely no idea whatbthe hell they're saying. Also Ranma should have a totally kitted out Zaku.
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