This plot is so wonky. And, not in any good way.

For pete's sake. Without a rooster to fertilize the eggs, there won't be any chicks. Eggs are just eggs. If they aren't eaten, they'll just rot and go to waste. Vegetarians should take a biology class.

There's just a blank space where the link for the uncensored version is supposed to be. Help?

Omg help me I'm actually crying!

I CANT GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY! (Tbh you've got me wanting pickles). ;) ️ Thank you!

I'm absolutely in love with this story! It's so fun and unique and detailed! I have read a few of your other stories and love them as well! Keep writing! ️️

This was a phenomenal ending! Just wow. Like. Shoot I have no other words but this was just amazing. Good good ending

This was stunning! I really loved it and can't wait to start the sequel. I'm going there now.

Wow i really appreciated this story. The way it ends... i just think it is sad that Iruka has never found someone to love for a long time.

I am stunned. Are we going to hear what was going on like... more info about Anbu or what? I'm confused... But anyway kakashi is an IDIOT! If Iruka forgives him I will be furious!

hmmm this is exciting. I can't wait to see what happens.

i dont think anybody should hit Iruka... I think that if his friends care about him they should show it in a different way.

theres a lot of Fbombs and insults in here. I don't think that he should call Iruka pathetic... well i guess theyre drunk but still.

nice chapter. that's interesting, i like your point about iruka being comfortable or whatever with awful people...

wow. Genma is creepier and creepier with every chapter lol. they both are actually. no wonder Iruka doesn't like them