good

Love it every time I re-read it

Great story - really enjoyed the way it was written

Utterly lovely.

I love this story! I actually read it for the sixth times or so today ;-)
I like the way you express really deep emotions without being overly dramatic or using too many words. And of course it's a really sweet family story that makes one think about their own.

I have just read this story for the fourth or fifth time and couldn't remember if I had reviewed or not. I love the moment Megan finds Don and the fact that he has his head buried in his hands. It's such a real, human response to fear. Lovely tale.

I enjoyed the format you used to tell the story; it was very engaging. This story was full of so many win moments. Thanks for writing it. :)

Great story. I would have liked it a little more if everything was in order but it was cool how you did this too. Two thumbs up.

Oh my gosh. I don't know how I have missed this story before, but I'm so happy to have found it. It's wonderful. So well written, and I got choked up in the last scene between the three Eppes men. You handled the family dynamics very well-it was true to character and realistic and emotional. Great job. I know I'll be rereading this-a lot. :)

I-LOVE-IT ! Thanx for the story !

I really loved this story.

It looks vaguely familiar. Did you post it somewhere else before?

Normally I get lost with stories that go back and forth in a time line but your sequences were short and made it easy to follow.

There is an economy to your writing here that works well. That is a difficult skill to master. Most people, myself included, have a tendency to just write and write until what we want to get across is on the page. What you have done to find the right words to do that same thing without what I call the Dickens Syndrome. (too many words)

Ha ha is that like the line in Amadeus "too many notes"

Anyway, using lots of words to tell you that this was a wonderful piece.

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OMG! THis was WONDERFUL! I don't know how I missed it the first time around. Part of me wants to think that Don might not be so open, even after an event like that...but you know what? SO what! This was fantastic! Heck, you almost had me in tears over Don's final note to his family. Great writing method...it totally worked and I loved it!

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That was totally awesome. Great story! Very realistic.

This is very good. The writing technique works well. Love the brotherly bonding!

That was nice - good characterisation and I really liked the stuff with Don & Charlie :)