Oh my gosh I am crying at my desk at work! SWAK is one of my favorite episodes and this was perfection! They would have made the perfect couple!

I never cry at stuff that I read, yet this had tears streaming down my face. Well done :)

Very very sad but still I loved this!

When you put the warning up at the beginning I thought "Pah! I'm not gonna cry!"... And what happened? You made me cry;).. Well written this was so poignant! There were a few grammatical errors and tense changes that weren't quite right, but mostly enjoyed it even though I was crying my eyes out. I wish they'd gotten the chance to tell each other that they loved each other in the actual series :'(.. Thank you for sharing your dream.

AWWWWWWW GAH! SOOOO SWEEET! :D :D : D: D

beautiful.

I LOVE THIS STORY! i haven't read such a great story like this in a long time!

Update, man. Show us the aftermath and how Kate recovers. Please.

omg you made me cry! it was very very good. congrats to your talent

*tears*

that was so sad...cried my eyes out..haven't done that in a while...oh wow..i was just bawling...tissue warning was a good idea...oh man...i could barely see the screen in the end...i had to reread a few lines to finally no what it said...man...i have only just stopped crying

Love NCISchick xoxoxoxo

Whoa. That was...whoa. That is the closest I've come to actually tearing up when reading fanfiction. Which is like crazy hard to make me do. Good job.

God, I've seen this ep so many times and can recite it line for line. I gotta say, this is the first SWAK death fic that made me cry. _ T_T (mixed emotions)

*TEARS*

OMG I bawled so sad

ok im sitting here balling my eyes out and as i was reading the last part i was just staring at it and had too reread it cause i didnt take it in properly. This is really good but sad. but what is life without a couple of sad movies and fics. thank you

AbbyLover

AR i've only ever read two stories that have made me cry before and one was my own that tally's now gone up to three SO well done tear jerker