If you plan on making a sequel, may I suggest taking a writing course first. This storyline was a little too fast paced, I mean there's practically nothing to it. To put it frankly this is just a skeleton of a story you need to put more detail into it (aka muscles, fat, and skin.)if you don't, it'll be a waste of an interesting storyline.

blush... tehe

Yuzu knows she's a girl because Ichigo said she was. So Yuzu continued on with it.

Also, thanks for the reviews. :)

how did Yuzu know it was a she? I mean, that isn't very easy when you try to do it with a dog. Well, great job anyway

gaa you update 3 chapters in one day and leave it there gaa...to juicy to just stop...gaa : ) you update fast so theres no need to ask

wow that was juicy

i like at the begining w/mayuri not wanting to run into kenpachi...

WHO IS IT? MUST KNOW! so cool, please continue

Fang sure has a big mouth XD

Yay, lets play tag! XD

Zaraki's turn... man that's scary...XD can't wait to see what happens

the best part of the whole thing is that you update fast!

its a nice comic relief sorta kinda thing with setting hanataro on fire

umm, why the heck was Hanataro almost killed? XD poor Hana-chan... we all know he isn't very lucky, but getting struck by kidou...twice! that's Hana-chan for ya. XD

Mayuri... Dragon is going to have a blast with this... I kind of feel bad for the poor guy... after what you did to Hanataro, I'm pretty sure Mayuri isn't going to live past this. Just don't hurt Nemu (puppy dog eyes) yay, can't wait for next chapter -

Target Practice? lets just pray she's better at it than Renji was at the beginning, or with her power she might blow up al Seireitei XD

Isn't it shikai, instead of shakai? I'm not very sure know... I'll look it up. It just looked kind of weird, -

Is Dragon still going to sleep in Komamura"s division?

Please continue -