too ooc or it would have been really good

Sooo good! I'm going to head over to the continuation story! Great intro :D

Rereading 3

Very interesting

I forgot to say that one of my favorite lines that I smiled at but was also so saddened by was, "Haku fell in love with the Konoha Naruto talked about."
But alas, he sees things through different eyes and it is not how Konoha truly is.
But that's also the beauty of that line, it specifies that Naruto's Konoha is what drew Haku in and made it such a wonderful sounding place.
I don't know if I've said everything right to actually convey what I felt but it's kind of the best I can do right now... w

Oh my god, I absolutely love this. So touching and it shines a different light on Zabuza and Haku's characters, I also love the use of Haku's ice mirrors and Zabuza's inner thoughts. If I didn't come to love this so much and didn't know about the continuation by Evil Genius I would be shouting at the injustice of this being a oneshot and crying for more.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing those!
Take care and have fun!

This is one of the best one shots I have ever read... I'm crying now... In happy tears!

this is really good

read the last chapter for the rest of this as writen by Evil Genus and i now have to wait for the rest of the tale

:D I like this fanfic. It speaks to me emotionally... on a deep level.

love the one shot. very well written.

#suddenly fall in love with this fic#

Zabuza-samaaa! Hakuuu! Arigatou! X'D

Wow, just wow. Characters where spot on, writing was excellent and oh so deep! Been a long time since something like this has made me this emotional. I've been less moved by death scenes of favourite characters lately. This is really amazing! Give yourself a pat on the back and a treat to eat you deserve it for this.

Heh. 'Ruto's Therapy Jutsu works every time. And Zabuza rocks!

Yes! Yes! Yes! You have given me the inspiration I needed for Zabuza in my story! I heart this! It's so good...