Its ok really i think the reson that kashi didn't wake up beacse he mite thinking he going bonkers this was dream( if it was this really gay pever ) and this not bad

it was really good

Awesome

It's pulling him closer. and not pushing him further.. err. yeah y'know.

omg this was great hehe i like how the sexual tension built up before hand xD

Kakashi and Sakura must be heavy sleepers haha. Or kakashi was watching while sakura passed out from a nosebleed.

i thought it was yummy in all its cirusy glory.

I think you did a very good job at the lemon, I can't help but wounder what Sakura and Kakashi are going to think when they wake up.

How the firetruck did the noises not wake any of them up.

its good/but i was expecting kakashi to wake up and say some thing like -,'Oh, how wonderful, I get a show.'

I think it was really cute ;)

xoxo HinaKicksAss

oh god, every thing u write is amazing.

Sweet...yet weird..

wowzers I love this it's awesome I've never had the guts to write a lemon before, it's really hard heh heh lol no pun intended but this story was great *thumbs up*

you did a good job on both the story and the lemon, im still trying to get the courage up to post my first one

Wow I loved that lemon. But what happened to Kakashi? ~_