Damn, this story really awesome XD
I don't know I holding my breath until I finish the chapter

This is a sad story at first. I like it though.

Love this story! I was so sad at the end of the first chapter. It was quite a tragic way to end a Sesshoumaru and Kagome love story. But thankfully, you did a sequel! :) Although it was a little weird that Kagome retained all her past memories, it does save a lot of explanations. However, I was hoping Sesshoumaru could fall in love a 'brand new' Kagome, the wooing process would have been fun. Nonetheless, it was a good sequel. I like the ending especially. So many kids! And the last twist on Rin's engagement was funny. Great job! :)

That was a great read. It was sad and I felt for them both. Thank God you wrote an alternate ending bec the first one would have sucked. Thank you for writing this

I am so glad you made that second chapter! I needed that happy ending...

LUVVV IT~ XD

Awesome fanfic! I love it! 3

AW LOVE THE STORY AMIGITA( FRIEND IN SPAINSH)1! i was crying, laughing and getting angry. rrealy good keep up the good work, you rock. Hey can I be one of their daughte, a twin with long black hair, golden eyes with a speck of brown and a full demon named Enayoui9 Ans. , from I love you and i do too) or Delight or Liliane which mean beauty,purity,innocent, or Serentity. Please! LOVE THE STORY! YOU BRING OUT A LOT OF MY EMOTIONS AND I HIDE THEM PRETTY WELL.

I love the story!

I almost fell off of my chair when Sess found out about Rin being engaged in the end! It was hilarious!

This was so sad but it was so sweet. Good job.

That was an absolutely amazing story.

Thanks for the originality and creativity. I'm glad Sesshoumaru didn't give up on Kagome.

i like your story. the enng of the fist chapter made me cry and the ending of this chapter mad me laugh. its very good.

its pretty good, realy its funny at the end, he could've known about the engagment though, other then that its cool.

What a wonderful the ending.I just love Sesshomaru's reaction!

I loved it! I usually avoid one-shots, and anything under an M rating, but I'm glad that I ignored that and read this one! I almost cried at the end of the first chapter and I couldn't stop laughing at the end of the second. Lately I've been finding that people either drag on a story so that they can make it long when they're really is only enough meat for one or two chapters or they try to fit to much info into a one-shot setting. But you're story was the perfect length for the plot. You should read the end of the first chapter while listening to the song 'Lullaby' by Josh Groban. If that doesn't bring you to tears... In short, GREAT JOB!