This is so completely and utterly heartbreaking. I'm sitting here crying my eyes out. Excellently written, you are extremely talented. Thank you so much for sharing this piece.

With each word, you wrung another tear, another heartbreak, another audible sob. You deftly evoked from me every emotional response you sought. You are truly gifted. Why aren't you still writing?

So I find myself here again, balling my eyes out. This piece is pure torture to read, but so beautiful that I can't help myself.

That was absolutely gut wrenching. Horrifically beautiful, and awefully painful to read (but in a good way).

Oh my God

this is amazing! I never write reviews but I had to tell you how awesome this writing is!

Yikes, break the heart strings. That was intense and well written, I can't quite find the words at the moment, so sad.

Alright, now you made me cry. I don't even know what to say this is so good. Sad and horrific, but beautiful too, in that they at least found each other at the end and could take comfort in each other.

ASDFGHJKL YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO A PERSON. I AM SO INCAPACTITATED NOW. OMG. THIS WAS SO SAD): great job though. (Y)

Ohhh my God, I don't even know what to write, I can barely see the keys through my tears. Such a well written piece and so moving and damn you now I'm splotchy and red. But in a good way. Keep it up, you write heart wrenchingly beautiful. I have chills.

*Cries*

I've never thought that they would actually go through with the killing of the transgenics. This is a very unique one shot filled with so many emotions that had me crying my eyes out by the end of it.

This is a work of brilliance. Great work.

Take care and have a great week.

~KWF~

Ahh, oh my gosh. That was so terribly heart-breaking. I cried... A lot.

This was amazing...

Wow, that was really powerful.

omg if they'd ended it like that i may have needed therapy lol That was an amazin endin! Honestly brilliant!