Beautiful story! Saving! Thank

For some reason just now i was able to pinpoint a smutt scene that was probably taken out of this chapter. Funny enough as i read it and watched the sentence trail off, for once I was actually relieved that a smutt scene had been taken out. i am still pobdering as to why, if it possibly had been at all, but either way I was glad because I was able to let my imagination run wild for a few moments as I envisioned what was not said about the scene after it had been set by the words written. I thank you dear writer for wording it the way that you did. It set the scene perfectly and the use of the readers imagination in that situation was perfectly placed. I do not see this in many of the stories that I read here on FFN, but I relish in each jem I do find from time to time and take the time to leave a well thought review for thwm expressing my emotions towards the piece. Very well done. Thank you for this jem of a story!

- JezebelReaper

whoaa. atropos is inside hermione? that is bizarre...

So how did Hermione and Atropos merge?

I just remembered, Dumbledore didn't kill Grindelwald did he? Wasn't he killed by Voldemort in his search for the Elder Wand?

Absolutely loved it. I am so going to name my kid Ysabel. Or Silas. :D

I read this fanfic and also the other two before it and I loved them! They were all well written and so good I couldn't stop reading!

Wait, is Atropos bisexual or homosexual now? What the blazes?

Hmm.. interesting story, interesting ending. I did enjoy it and I liked how you tied it up at the end, though I still say that switching tenses detracted from the flow considerably. Other then that flaw, well done.

As much as I am enjoying this rather confusing and convoluted tale you've woven, I must say that it is likewise confusing, and annoying, to have the view keep switching from third to first person. It interrupts the feel of continuity in the story and takes away from the reading. And I don't really see the point of it. It certainly doesn't add anything to the story so I don't see that there was a need for it. To be quite honest it's turning me off to the story, though I will most likely finish it if only to see how you tie everything up. But for future reference, it's best to keep to one tense.

I just have to say. I Love You. I Love You.I Love You. Big hugs. Thank you for bringing Hermione back. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

I have no words for how clever and genuinely perfect this story was. I am literarly speechless. I really have no idea what else to say but 'perfect'. :D

Person Of A Strange Origin

Once again, awesome story! Ingenious plot, the twists and turns only making it better! I loved Atropos, even though I knew I shouldn't, just because evil Hermione is so much more fun! She and Hermione made some incrediably witty comments, like the "For heaven's sake, can none of you check a pulse?" More genius, though I know I got the exact quote wrong. Also when Atropos reaslised she had brought Hermione back too and just said "Oh, fuck." That was an amazing sequel, with yet more original plot, and to top it off was written well with a brilliant writing writing style!

Once again, awesome story! Ingenious plot, the twists and turns only making it better! I loved Atropos, even though I knew I shouldn't, just because evil Hermione is so much more fun! She and Hermione made some incrediably witty comments, like the "For heaven's sake, can none of you check a pulse?" More genius, though I know I got the exact quote wrong. Also when Atropos reaslised she had brought Hermione back too and just said "Oh, fuck." That was an amazing sequel, with yet more original plot, and to top it off was written well with a brilliant writing writing style!

YAY.. It's a nice ending...