| Reviews for Incinerate |
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   Princess mAlice chapter 1 . 11/24/2015 Holy shiet nice and damn there should have been a sora lemon after. I like sadistic axel |
| tendra-kh chapter 1 . 7/13/2015 This is the greatest Axel fanfic I've ever read. Assuming you're male and still active, would you be interested in cosplaying? |
| axelslover-demyxsgirl chapter 1 . 1/1/2011 that last sentence was deep :D |
| WolfScar chapter 1 . 5/7/2010 This was an interesting story. You definitely played with Axel's standard character, which I enjoyed. Kairi's emotions were also fun to follow. However, I would watch some of your description. I feel like you leave some important stuff out and then I am confused and lose focus on your story. The main one was when he pinned her to the wall, but then was kissing her shoulder blades. Perhaps you met collarbones? Good job over all and I liked the ending. |
| The-sloth chapter 1 . 2/5/2010 Sexy! |
| Shadow of Intent chapter 1 . 9/12/2009 you must really hate kairi to put er in a story like this lol. I love it! |
| Esinahs chapter 1 . 2/7/2009 well this is a dark side of axel...good job at characterizing him this was a creative story |
| Michele-bell chapter 1 . 3/7/2008 I really liked this story! I just recently got interested in AxelxKairi and so this is the first story I read about them. And it was really good! I love the details of it. Oh man. Axel's sexy. Plain and simple. xD The story really fit with the game, since Axel says to Sora, "About Kairi, sorry about the things I did to her." Anyways, great story |
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 1 . 1/26/2008 Cool. I love this pair, I really do, but for some reason they all seem to work on the same basic lines...oh well. I don't mind. I can't get enough of it anyway! |
| TwilightKtty chapter 1 . 12/13/2007 thats so sad... wah *sob* |
| oh how beauty burns chapter 1 . 8/8/2007 ohmg. 3 That is GREAT, you are an AMAZING writer. You made me fall in LOVE with this pairing. and I HATE Kairi. |
| deadlykitty chapter 1 . 7/31/2007 aww... I hate how Axel dies, but I loved the story. this is the first KH fic I've read, and I must say I'm very impressed. please write more! |
| TheAngel'sLover chapter 1 . 7/18/2007 Oh my God. Wow. That was amazing. Your really made the feeling and sensations come to life! That was so hot! I love it! I love it! I love it! |
| Rogue Rikku chapter 1 . 7/15/2007 How sad, but so good! Axel is one of my favorite characters next to Riku. I love reading stories about them since there aren't that many. Kairi is also one of my favrorites, so A pairing with her and Axel is just great. - Nice work and great detail! |
| dusk chapter 1 . 7/14/2007 dang u said this was only for a dare? This is incredible. Forget the whole pervy oart but you place th words like perfectly on the paper. Im not a fan of Kari and Axel but I was just bored. This is great! Im goin to check the rest of ur written stuff. Bye now! |