Cool story naru/anko pairing is nice and i hope little naruto dosent end up with hinata god i hate her

boring...
haih..

I read this story and stop when I get to this chapter every time without fail. You really just take a shit on the whole thing in a single chapter.

Is it just me or is this very similar to Pain,Hunger and Betraya by Tyrannitorl. Not hating on this fic just noticed after I just read that fic and was looking for another Naruto/Anko story

THAT IS WHERE YOU END IT?! I started reading this knowing that it had been cut short in 2009, however I never would have guessed you would cut it off there. Anyway I liked this story, I wish that you would come back and finish it.

wow i reall enjoy this shame it appeares to be over as you havnt updated in a long time but figured id give you orais for this creation

plz update

Lol talk about overpowered.. Have you seen the current overview of Uzumaki Naruto (wiki).. Pain (Nagato), Sasuke, 'Madara' and Kabuto/Orichimaru aren't the only ones OP in Kishimoto's story(lineI love the story and plot.. I wonder if you can make Nanashi meet Mei (Mizukaze) or other Jinchuuriki (besides Nii Yugito, Gaara and Naruto) as well?
And write out the meeting of him and Ay (Raikage)?
Waiting for more Awesomeness..

Sarutobi Hiruzen, father of Sarutobi Asuma and the Sandaime (third) Hokage/leader of the leaf village
Tenten doesn't have an official name though, because she was an orphan (? Not sure, but most likely as parent were never mentioned)

Love the story, please keep up the good work!

Well, you are the best fan fiction writer known to man. Sarutobi Sasuke, I swear.

Good story, which makes it a shame that you likely will never continue it.

Updateeeeee

Its Sarutobi Hiruzen

Why is this listed as complete? Dropped ! complete

A counterpoint to this Locus Point idea. Mito held the Kyubi for upwards of 80 years. How do you factor that in?