ive never even thought about a dorothy relena pairing seriously. i love it now though. great job.

Wow. o_o that was just plain amazing. The whole thing was so IC, and...wow. Just wow. Amazing ^_^

I love this! You did a perfect job of showing the relationships between Heero, Duo, Relena and Dorothy. This is so realistic, too- I can actualy see this as being a part of the series. Poor Dorothy.

loved it ^.^

Wow. U rule, u write very well!

Wow...this is really beautifully written!

Oh... That was so sad! I feel bad for Dorothy! It was really good though, too ~Kat

THAT was beautifully written. I am not a fan of shoujo-ai, but this was so well described and heart-wrenching that while reading this I could enjoy the idea (and I like Dorothy in this which is no small task, trust me) Wonderful plotline and very realistic..life very rarely gives you a happy ending

Awwwwwww... Thats kind of sad. I wish relena would come to her senses. I like the way you had them dance, that scene came to life beautifully. Duo and Dorothy and Heero and Relena all in their own little worlds of hope and dreams with Duo almost comforting Dorothy. Beatumous!

Wow... that's the first shoujo-ai I've ever read, and the first story where I actually liked Dorothy! Poor thing ;_; Excellent story, especially how everyone disappears in the end. Great job!

*blinks, and stares* ... *blinks* Good Lord, that was *good*. o_o It's so very IC for all of them, I can actually see this playing out in the series, and still keeping everything as it was... Wonderful job!