lmaooo typical shikamaru. anyway, this was hot, mmmh! ...i’m such a moron.

litttt

absolutely fantastic... so hot... delicious... sexy waaaaaah.! (faint)

This is so damn sexy and perfect! You should consider making this a series where Naruto and Sasuke fuck in public places and people always catch them XD.

I absolutely love your way of talking to us readers! Damn you're just as insane as I am xD

I like the part at the end when you and the characters talk.
And who is the pale guy? I'm not very fer into the second
series. I hate iPad typoes, but I just realized that the typing messed up and I would have to erase every thing.
I'll shut up now.

I live the disclaimer and the story was awesome

I really loved the fanfic an can't think of anything that should change. Keep up the good work

Lol

Your my favorite author, just saying. Is not because you wrote a sexy ass scene ( Nope) or how I read it 3 times (No really, it's not about sexy ass lemon) or how it was fucking hot. (Alright maybe it was the sex scene but I don't understand! What gave it away!?)

That was a hot story! You should continue it.

This is one of the best fanfictions I have read your an amazing author

Hah. That was great, that bit at the end with the stamp was great as well. Well done.

Nice story. Funny as well. :D

Add an extra chapter with Neji and Shikamaru if u can please. _
Loved it.