Amazing story, just a little hard to read at times and get my head around what is happening. I am not sure if this is due to the writing style or lack of my own vocabulary range in which, I have been presented with words that I had to look up lol. However, there were also instances where the sentences and paragraphs felt confusing and with the 'dotted around' spelling mistakes and used of repeated words it took me a while to read this story. IT WAS WORTH IT!
I noticed quite a few time you used the the same character name when it should have been two different ones. Like in the last chapter you wrote, ''Satoshi shrugged, twisted in his chair to face Satoshi'' There other instances of this through out the story and it added to the confusion. And a few times i was unsure as to which charter was talking during dialogue.
In terms of the story, I loved the plot, and the mystery. The story its self was really cool. I wish the ended had more to it but I really liked the way it was done. XD

What just happened? This story is waaay too confusing... Hopefully it will clear up in these next few chapters.

This is the first PalletShipphing fic I've read so I don't have much to compare this to, but I have to admit that it was one of the most exceptional piece of writing I have ever come across- and I read a lot. Your writing style is truly inspiring and each chapter has so much to offer to the reader. Kudos to you.

! Amazing story, well constructed, Beautifully descriptive 100/10 great character development, the works of a professional writer, you are amazing! Please make more, have been reading this for 2 week's and have enjoyed everybit of it

ok, hello, just dropping by to say that when i saw one of the new sun and moon trailers with samson oak i immediately thought of this fic and its prof. oak dream-variant-thing (its been a while). excuse me but can you see into the future? is this what this is?

This was such a beautiful piece of writing! I will be very honest here as I say this; while I am a HUGE Palletshipper, I usually tend to avoid the stories that use their Japanese names. I know, that narrows the pool down a lot, but somehow I just can't accept it - they have always been Ash and Gary to me.
But this story...it was something else altogether. I knew from the very first paragraph that Japanese names or not, I HAD to read this work of art. It was intense, to say the least. Ash and Gary were so in character, it was not very hard to imagine this being an actual Pokemon movie or something. You write so well, I remember having to put my phone down after reading an exceptionally well written line, and just staring at the wall, thinking, wow, that was some marvelous writing. I kid you not, I loved it that much.
Kudos to you!

FEEL THE LOVE POURING FROM MEEEE
Thank you so much for writing this even in the choas of life. It's beautiful, and it ended so well. The characters were perfect, the plot was creative, and I feel overly satisfied with finishing this novel-length piece. You definitely deserve all of the likes the world can offer.

Words cannot describe the many emotions that coursed through me as I read this entire beautiful piece of fiction. Honestly, it's been a long, LONG time that anything's wrought out that many different emotions at once, especially a STORY. All of your similies and descriptions were so unique and breath-taking-I adore your writing style. If this story was made into a hard-back book, I would buy it in a heartbeat just to have a tangible copy of this. By far one of the best fics I've ever read. It IS the best fic in this fandom, for sure! I loved your version and characterization of both Satoshi and Shigeru-different from the anime, but fitting. You made them come to life, while in the anime their personalities are just 2D and a bit boring. I couldn't help but to stalk your profile (haha) and saw where you've just finished the outline of the sequel to this, but it's been a couple of years since then. Is it still coming along? Because it's all I can do just to stay in my seat from anticipation. I can't WAIT to read it, that is if you're still planning to publish it! I'm BEGGING you too! Heck, if anything, email or PM it to me! On a different note, how's Japan treating you? It's been a lifelong dream of mine to visit Japan, let alone LIVE there! I'm currently trying to teach myself Japanese. Surprisingly it's going well so far, especially for being self-taught! Any tips? But anyway, I hope life is going well for you! Keep up your awesome work! God bless!

This was beautiful! I loved the character development and this was the cutest 3

Wow ! It was long to read but it was worth it ! That's really a good story, well written. I really loved it ! 3 Thanks for sharing )

I enjoyed this story very much! The ending was beautiful. :D

After 24 chapters of dancing around and being jealous and girls... they finally kiss! And in an epic manner too. lol

Ash's pikachu is male not female.

I think Satoshi needs someone to be jealous of, too xD :D haha

This story keeps me on my toes with every chapter. I just LOVE the character development in here and the progression of the plot. It all feels so natural and just asfhfjssbflsbfj