I love this pairing. I love this story

Lol...just funny. As serious as this was...it was just...I loved the ending. That's all xD

I love it. O_w

But if he really went for it i would have to worship you.

I though Hineas was so mean at first, but you showed his vulnerable side after all.

this surprised me. i really loved it. great story!

Oh this is such a good story! I love the ending. Hineas' ego is . . . strange. He just couldn't be bested by Tana could he? Thank you for writing/typing this short story. There is only so much EphraimXHineas in the world.

lol... omg XD

yayy... will u continue this fic?

love this pairing XD

and you did it good...

Ohoho! I love this pairing, and Eirika Tana as well...

In any case! I love the flow of this; for a moment, you had me totally convinced it was angsty, then all of a sudden had that sweet open-ended finish that leaves me knowing it'll be a happy ending; yet it wasn't too abrupt, either.

All in all, great work! x3

Lol. He got the courage just because he didn't want to be bested by his sister... XD

I'm glad I decided to read this fanfic. XD

Don't you just love Hineas' ego? XD

He practically compare Roston with Frelia. XD

Little smug bastard. XD

The way you wrote this fanfic is so great, you really get Hineas' personality.

Good job, hope you will write more.