Wow, just wow. For the rather small number of chapters, the story is wonderful. Nice work this is a great read [thumbsup] [Clapping]

Congratulations! You havcan actually created OCs I like! And the story is fabulous. I really hope you continue

Noooooooo! Ppease dont kill me like this. Please. Its s beautiful! I want to cry so bad. Its amazing.

I sincerely hope this story is not dead like you promised, because it's just getting to the good part! I actually really liked Whiplash and Nic's characters. They don't feel like OCs at all, they feel like canon characters. You did a very good job! And the plot is very interesting. Now that Soundwave has appeared, what will happen next? I love the chase scenes, they are really desperate to get away from Decepticons huh? Kinda felt bad when Whiplash finally realized that he had been running away from Bumblebee. Whiplash's story is very sad and tragic, hope he finds companionship in Nic soon. That brief mention of Jazz tugged at my heart, I still can't accept how easily he died. Hope you update this soon! This is a very wonderful story!

Loved the story. I really hope you get around to finishing it at some point.

I just binge-read this entire thing and I applaud you! This is an incredible rollercoaster ride! I love Nic! She's courageous and kind and awesome! I love Whiplash! I love everything about this fic!

I'm going to favourite this and follow it on the off-chance that you come back to it, even though it's 2016. Keep it up, TLRH! I'm ready when you are! :)

Sorry, but I have to do this: Let's Get Ready To Rumble! XP

Apologies, but seriously, this is great and I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to read the rest.

uh oh, but wow! this is impressive stuff as I have probably already said- can't fully remember. Anyway, nice work and I love how you use the right terminology throughout. Awesome!

I know that this was last updated 2008 but I'm willing to hope that someday we'll see more of Nic and Whiplash, because your story is amazing!

I NEARLY DIED WHEN YOU WROTE "ITS TIME TO GO HOME"
DONT DO THAATTTTTTT I ALMOST SCREAMED NOO that wouldve been a hell of a miscommunication to overcome ; -;
buT how nic got a job as drift-compatible w whippy was so good (rip him, optimus! rip simmons to shreds!) thank u sm

nic's response to the flashlight is so funny and cuteeeee "stoppit" awww i just **u**

lennox's "subtlety" though omg. i *saw* her disbeliving stare as the poor punner scrambled

"lies that were so real to my processor i wanted to *die* in them" MY BABY MY CHILD NOOO ;;;;; - ;;;;;;; tbh if u elaborate on what whiplash suffered through u could break us all with a couple thousand words. maybe a couple hundred.

and YEEESSS! THEY FINALLY MET but oh man are the autobots going to have a load on their hands when those two wake up

i feel like whiplash has been running for so long that he doesnt know when to stop, and that he cant rly trust any other bots for a long long time... like hes gunna wake up and keep waiting for the other shoe to drop when it sounds too good to be true ;;;;; -;;;;;;

THOSE SICK STUNTS OH MY *GOD* i cant tell if my increased heartbeat is due to the heartwarming trust nic n whippy has or the adrenaline ur awesome action scenes inspire - *seriously*, i could *see* a slow-mo of the jump from a camera and it was utter magic.

that gas station scene in the beginning had me in *pain* coz i thought u might pull the so-close-so-far meet-and-miss thing and have nic n whip run without knowing about bee

im gunna read that overhead jump thing again omg u the best

THOSE WERE THE SICKEST STUNTS IVE EVER READ OHMYGOD BY THE END OF THE FIC NIC'S GUNNA BE DOING WHEELIES WHILE CHECKING HER TEXTS OR SOMETHING
its so fascinating to see the explicit difference in mindset Whiplash has in regards to earth, like, the whole age thing, and how he views *natural-fucking-disasters* christ sakes whippy

nic's motorcycle clothing sounds kickass! i cant wait to see how her meeting w the autobots n sam n mikaela goes
and also i wonder how nic'll react to the on-the-road/hunted lifestyle? i kind of hope she pisses off the rest of the decepticons despite the danger factor