This is a nice story, but it does not feel finished. If this really is the end then the rating should be K! Their is no way this story is currently a M story!

I don't think she can resist him or not having a relationship with him. I think she'll break the engagement with Nevile and, after enough time have passed, she'll start seeing Severus...

This was such a great story, though it would have been better if Hermione was engaged to Ron.

Ok, so I jumped into this without having read all the intro stuff. SO, when I started noticing the eerie House similarities, and then the AWESOME DIALOGUE OF AWESOME, I promptly died and had to declare this an instant favorite. :P You've managed to integrate the Top Two Greatest Fandom Obsessions of My Life rather flawlessly, so I must applaud you. :D GENIUS!

Fun story. The interactions were well written, and I liked the House references (especially the produce!).

I love Nev, but ... heh.

Good fic.

Lovely story, especially since I found this a few hours before Hose MD came on and so I spotted a lot of the similarities...which I absolutely loved. I'd love to see more of what happens, but at the same time I really like where you ended it as well. Nice job!

This seems like an absolutely wonderful... *start*... to a really good story. As a oneshot it leaves me wanting more - what happens when Neville returns? I want to know about the coffee date. Even whether or not the dragon pox potion works - we need more details!

I hope you reconsider this oneshot and end up adding the rest of the story to it. I really liked it, but I'd like it much more if there were more to it.

Thanks.

Well, this really is an open ending! But I liked the story very much. You have a great writing-style and I like how you portray Snape and Hermione.

You don't plan a sequel, do you?

Well, if you do, would you let me know?

Greetings

Aldavinur

It would be nice to have a sequal...

Intriguing so far... charming to read. But maybe you should disguise the quote from "House, M.D." a bit better? Some people might object to that, even if the essence of it certainly fits the conversation.

I really enjoyed your story, but I was sad it ended where it did. I guess I always like to know what happens next.

spoken in the voice of Severus Snape...

"Is there any particular nefarious reason as to why you saw fit to end the tale here?... not that I care, but you could have least had the consideration to not leave me waiting for coffee, as my habits continualy leave me deprived of bedrest and caffeine is nescisary, albiet pleasurable, evil... due continue this story at MY soonest convenience..."

teehee, that was fun, and i do hope you are writing a sequal!

great job

dye

Great start! Hope to see more in the near future!

Wow... this is excellent! With this troublesome pair, there's no imagining what may happen. Terrific job writing this first chapter! As a reader, I'm completely and totally sucked in. Keep it up and update soon!