Reviews for Loyalty
Chocolate Pencil chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Some of the stuff here sent chills up my spine, no kidding. They were just so true.

"What's the best asset to a psychotic internationally wanted criminal who prays every night and goes to church and confesses like the good little boy he hasn't a hope in hell's chance of being anymore?"

Mello in a sentence, I swear.

This wasn't overly romantic or mushy, it just showed that Matt was Mello's only companion and friend, and it left so many undercurrents for the readers to interpret. I love this.
spaycesickle chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I can actually picture their relationship like this... very well done :)
ChocoCoatedLemons chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
OH. This was so amazing, I don't even know where to fucking start.

"What’s the best asset to a psychotic internationally wanted criminal who still prays every night and goes to church and confesses like the good little boy he hasn’t a hope in hell’s chance of being anymore?

Matt."

That little bit was incredible.

You have to love Mello and Matt, right? Even when it's fics like this, where they're not romantically involved, where it's just Mello needing Matt in spite of himslef, and Matt needs him, they rock.

-hugs Matt&Mello-;
inichuinmylife chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
That last bit really tugged at my heartstrings. Mello and Matt are just like bread and butter. You can have bread on its own, but it tastes better with butter. (Strange comparison, I guess.)
Chronometrist chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
That's so sweet.

I love it.
RandomTopic chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Deep. I liked it.
adjective-noun chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
This is wonderful!

It's so sweet, if possible it made me love Matt even more!
TheMajesticBeanCurd chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Absolutely beautiful. You pictured their relationship perfectly without too much mushy scenes. It's a fave. It's a weird relationship (matt and mello), but there's something more than meet the eyes. Mello needs Matt and Matt always be there for him. Nice clean conclusion.

Lovely!
saaski-crys chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
It's so fluffy! I get this warm and fuzzy feeling reading it!

Why does everyone call Mello homicidal? :P

Wonderful story.
The One and Only Haruno Sakura chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Aw...

Wait, wait! What happens next?
Tora-Star chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
I love this! It fills my heart with warmth!
Elisabetta Avalone chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
This was very good. You write the two of them fairly realistically I'd say. Well done.
Ceirwy chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
A very poetic fic. I love it.
Tezu-chan chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Omgz. That was awesome. I absolutely loved it~ Poor Mello -huggles-
tenamanda1988 chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Fantastic one-shot, I love how it shows just hoe much they need each other, and how desperately loyal matt is to Mello