Wow! You are an incredible writer. I love the story. However ... HAPPY ENDING PLEASE! The other version was way too sad. *sniffs* such feels!

I'm not normally one for happy endings, but this time...

HAPPY ENDING! I CHOOSE YOU!

Oh my god this was so sad! But I loved it all the same. Still continuing my treck across your story's. thanks!

Hugs for super-happy fixit!

OMG I love the Doctor, Rose and Jack trinity! :D

Ashjksdfakhfdsl. Normally I don't really go for TenRose fics. I mean, I sorta ship them, I just don't really /like/ shippy stuff. And then... well anything with kids I downright don't like. Never have.

And for some reason, I couldn't stop squeeing over this. Oh, my goodness. Idek why I love this so much but I do and I can't help it. It's especially the last chapter I like. I'm just... like... Asgahjsdgah. I love him so much. xD

I love this story and I love this character and I think you did it brilliantly. x3

Oh my God.

When you said sad, I didn't think I'd be lying in my bed crying my eyes out at 11:30 at night. Jesse's adorable. But the Doctor died of broken hearts. D: Oh God, this was absolutely beautiful. I loved every bit of it. Though I preferred the happy ending a lot more, of course.

And Rose. I could picture her death scene perfectly in my head. And then the Doctor's reaction to her death made me feel like dementors just broke into my room and sucked the happiness out of me.

Okay, I'll stop rambling. I know you wrote this ages ago but I'm just now reading it. Great work.

the sad ending made me...sad :( but amazing fic

Hi

I've been reading your older stories. Just finished Beyond the Void. You write the Doctor very well, Rose and Jack too. Love the whump in them as well even the sad ending in this one. The plot lines you use are very interesting as well. I'm enjoying your writing very much. I see you have a new one you are working on as well. Look forward to reading it and some of your longer fics as well. Thanks for writing and sharing them.

this is one of the best fanfics ive read and u know i love your storys... i dont wanna upset anyone but i loved the sad version i do love a bit of battered dr for some reason ... the nice ending was good aswell your a great writer

Hmm... That was kind of... weird. But very good.

That was actually a pretty good ending. Very sad, but also a little sweet.

Ah, but are all rulers straight? Okay, that didn't make sense. As much as I would have loved 10, Rose, and Jack all together in the Tardis like in series 1 with 9, I absolutely love Torchwood. He's better there. Oh, how I wished Doctor 10 and Jack kissed. That would have been the best! Sorry, great story, though.

Wow...this sad ending is really wonderful!...and no, i'm not (very) sadist.

Great fic!