awsomeness! you write each lemon differently most people can only write the same exact thing over and over! but for u its way different for even just am later time in the same story!ur really good at writing..especially sasunaru/narusasu!^_^!

One of the most erotic story I have ever read. What else should I say than 'Great'? I love this very much, thank you.

u do have a way with words, do you not? *grins*

i loved it ever so much.. "variety?" - pssfh, as if.. XD

So Jelp ( i have a wash cleaning soap called that btw) do me the greatest favor... write more like this.. short, detailed, and straight to the point.. so to speak.

love from arena the perv

hahahaha...awesome! that was so hott! me likey! especially the last part! lol! that was so funny! good job! ^_^

Peace Out! ^_^

I read Nameless Desires and Restless and Identity Crisis which you need to update! They're Absolutely AWESOME! even this one! :)

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Ah, that was just fantastic. Lol, that really was awesome.

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oh god... that was one of the most visual smutastic fanfics i've read in a long time.

wow.

Pair of idiots!

OMFG HAHAHA THAT IS WAS FUCKING GOOD OMFG LIKE THE SECOND BEST? I DUNNOE I LOVE THE ONE COULD RESTLESS XD OMFG.. BUT TO BE HONEST IM ONLY THERE FOR THE NARUTO AND SASUKE SEX =] BUT IT WAS SOO GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.. BTW.. SOMETIME I DUN GET HALF THE MOVES THEY DO BUT.. =] i like it how sasuke makes the move on naruto not naurot makes the moves on sasuke =] thanks u it was soo good right more? more smut and lemon stuff btw im not srsly that sick but i just really like naruto the anime xDD

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Kawaii! This was the first Sasu/Naru I ever read, and I ADORED it. I've read it so many times since. Keep writing; you rock!

O/O! W-wow! Your the best! o3o -cough cough- I loved it..alot xD Erm...yeah...Keep up the good work! ;D

kawaii...

sasuke had it so bad for naruto i swear. and no, i'm not getting this mixed up, :D, it seemed that sasuke has head over heels with naruto. but i think it was really cute. really really cute. though, if i were naruto getting caught with the clone, i wouldn't have played it off so casually, i probably would have been like, "April fools!" or "It's only a dream sasuke!" or "Haha, it worked!" and vanish, making it seem like i was another clone. i would have straight up DIED! why did sasuke seem so freakin' cool in this? usually ppl think cool is a gay word, but no, when you think about it, cool a really tubular word. like awesome. and sasuke was just, out there, he was so freakin' rad, i would be so like, sulky if i were compared with the guy. anyway, great job! kudos! oh-ew. bleach is on over here. anyway, onto the topic. 5stars out of 5

"Surprise sex". Very funny.

i vote for a cold shower anyone second that