Skimming over this story, I was a little concerned that this piece would be one of those fics that have Sasori and Deidara with their generic "Explosions aren't art! Art lasts forever," "No Sasori-danna-kun-chan! Art is a bang!" squabbling before Deidara pounces on Sasori, "OH, TAKE ME SASORI-DANNA!" with the reply being, "Oh Dei-chan, you're soooooooo kawaii!"

I'm happy to say that I was pleasantly surprised with how much more true to their personalities this seems to be.

I would have liked it more, however, if you had elaborated just a bit more with the arguments, and had a more sensual scene with the blood. It could use some work, but the idea was absolutely ace.

I love this.

Very, very nice. I really like it.

And it proves that I'm not the only one mixing macabre and romance. Really nice story.

Holy shit...

Delicious. LOVE IT.

i loved this! this really made my day, cause now i'm gonna post this fic i have that's really morbid ( not as bloody as this though, lol) but is still ment to be funny. you have a similar sense of humor to mine, which makes me happy! i was giggling all through this , and that one alleteration you had with the m's was awesome...plus sasodei is almost ALWAYS good and smex-eh.

keep it up!

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