"What? Did I miss something. Back? "Back where?" I asked.

His head shot back to me. "Back to Sam.""

Oh, you made me start laughing. Not an easy task.

I liked how the ending trailed off. It let anything happen. Good job.

Aww I love it!

Aww!

Ha! (Yep, I'm not saying anything other than "Ha!". Cheesy, I know.)

Vera

Okay, I have a request... could you make this a two part thing and add the next scene? Please?

Oh my gosh! I want a Fang! Now!

Look what you've done! How can I tell my parents:"I want a Fang for my birthday please!"

you are such a brave author, to leave us hanging like that... t.t

lolz, but it was so adorable! x3 Fang was giving her advice and Max was like "I should follow his advice & him I love him!

thats like the prefect ending

if you want a Cliffhanger

gosh don't do that

awesome story

hehe how Fang mistaken Max's love one

oh and Fang Oo wow touchy shary feely

gah! update! i need more!

AH!

Me love!

Can you please do more writing soon!

Aw.

That is so cute.

Aw.

Awesome!

xoxo

i cant wait 4 the nxt chappie!

OMG (wow did I really just type that?) Make it a TWOSHOT! Please!

MAKEITATWOSHOT! MAKE IT A TWOSHOT!

Oh this is great! You are going to do more right? Like, when she tells him? Oh, please do more soon! Please! I love this! Please!

KeL xx