I wonder how Toph and Iroh would react if they knew.

Hmm... something to think about... I like it :D

Interesting Theory.

Nice story.

POOR LU TEN. though this would help explain why toph didn't avoid iroh.

OK.

How would you expand on it?

It didn't seem like he made a slight mistake. It seemed like he let his arrogance and impatience rule him.

-jw`chan

Very nice story, although a tad bit short. A wonderful idea for how Lu Ten died, although it does add a bit of irony to Toph and Iroh's friendship. It could be a bit mre descriptive, and perhaps told a little bit more from Lu Ten's point of view, but otherwise very wonderful!

Excellent idea!

Wow, this is a really original idea! Very cool :)

Wow.

What a wonderful and fantastically interesting idea. I loved it. You wrote it so perfectly, I'm kind of speechless right now. The idea caught me off guard as soon as I opened it.

Amazing job.

-karen

I never though about it before but you're right! This could have happend to Lu Ten! Nice work! That last part; kinda creepy...

Not bad. Actually, it's a pretty good idea and despite the lack of dialogue, a good fic. My only gripe is that it's really, really short. It feels more like a theory than actual fic but I've avoided Avatar fanfiction so long so maybe this is the new thing.

Good job.