I don't know for sure if this fic was the first I've ever read from your work but I loved it years ago and now I think it's my favorite.
You worked very hard on this one and it really shows. I can feel the dedication, the careful nursing of a great story. The lesson that sometimes fate would took away something that made life so fullfilling but it can be worth it in the end because it give you something more valuable in return.
It won't be easy and at times will be overwhelming but if you have the someone you love by your side then everything will be alright.
Loving this to pieces.

I honestly did not expect that from the summary. And I'm glad for it. This is such a beautiful piece of writing, grammatical and/or spelling errors aside, and the ending was appropriate and felt just...right. Had it been some sort of fluffy, lovey-dovey ending, it wouldn't have fit the whole "air" of the story.

I am also very in love with you right now. I want your literary genius. xD You are cool. That is all.

Make a follow up chapter! In fact, why don't you make this into a story, where Ichigo helps Rukia adjust to a normal life and begin actually doing school work!

Wow, just wow.

That was...extremely well-written.

The plot was very believable and the descriptions were incredible. Your portrayal of Rukia was especially great, as was Ichigo's.

My only criticism was his language. I didn't mind it really but I thought Ichigo referring to Rukia as a "bitch" quite often was a bit much. However that's just my opinion. (I also noticed a few insignificant spelling errors such as "murmering", which has another u, rather than an e, but that obviously does not detract from your spectacular writing).

Overall, a fantastic story. And I really liked the ending. It made me add this story to my list of favourites.

Please write more for Bleach. The stories that I have read (and I've read a number of your fanfics) are simply marvellous. :)

This was absolutely beautiful. Great work.

brilliant:) loved it:D my thumbs are up.

This fic is perfect in all aspects. it fits my standart of "awesome story". you have a good taste, I loved it:)

though I have to admit, I skipped a few paragraphs because...the hell? I dont even know! (sorry I'm stupid)

anyway, very lovely fic, I promise to re-read it at least 20 times:) its just too emotional and deep, i cant forget it:D

nice work, this fic made my day and is in my top 5 ichiruki list:)

good luck and keep up the good work!

I think you did a good job writing this fic. Happy ever after's are always work in progress in the real world. I guess when we say happy ever we always lose sight of that.

i loved this story i thought it was well written and had intricate details which is a rarity

that was a pretty good one-shot. the sentences were often really long and wordy, and then quite a few of them were fragments. it was kinda confusing to read, and a bit monotonous. the structures of your sentences didn't really vary; they basically kept up the same pattern. i liked your portrayal of rukia, though ichigo seemed a bit too cynical or sardonic. and uh... did there have to be THAT much cussing? i mean, i got some in my stories, but it seemed as if you were either trying too hard or you just wanted to put in a whole bunch of cuss words. sorry if that's not what you were intending, but it came across that way to me.

still, the ending was well-done. you seemed to be more comfortable writing the ending than you did with some of the things toward the beginning of the story. although, i am wondering, what inspired the name of this story? or, well, i mean, why did you call this story path to heaven?

- wolf's paradise

That was amazing! The characters were in character for the most part, and the story idea was great, and it was well written.

And no fluffyness, which is totally out of character

Thank you for being able to write in proper english. i was confused one or two times, but that was mainly me reading too fast trying to find out what happens next, hehe.

And you are a good writer. I felt like i was readiing a professionally written, um, excerpt from some novel.

A few things though:

1. Puts some breaks or something when changing the character be written about.

2. Ichigo does not use that much foul language, especially not in this situation. "Bitch", and all the "fucks" were to much. He would say something more like "stupid annoying midget" and i'm waiting for him to call her an imp and see her reaction :]

3. In my view(this is just my view, you may disregard this), I Ichigo is not THAT relunctant to be kind and compassionate. But again, this is just my perception of Ichigo.

Anyway, I'll go off to your profile now and read some of your other works, especially if they're Bleach.

loved it! really great! awesome! all complimets to you:D

-Narikou

Wow! I gotta say this is an amazing story! I can't imagine that the decision to leave the only world Rukia's known to be an easy one, even for love. Unlike many, she hasn't even basic memories of Earth since she died as an infant before developing any.

Some of the prose I thought was a bit awkward, but besides that, everything was pretty good.

i think that was really sweet and gave me a really fuzzy warm feeling inside. i really liked it... two thumbs up!

Well written, but I have to tell you I skimmed through a lot of what you wrote to get to different parts. Does that make since? Good idea, just seemed to be too much in it.

Absolutely AWESOME!

My only advice here would be to maybe divide it up into a two-shot. its a bit of a doozey all at once, hehe.

Grammar was excellent, descriptions great, and overall just oozed awesomeness. Great work!

Dak