...Wow... I am impressed. Truly. I can’t even put into words how much I liked this.

I like the ending. Great work.

Excellent ending. Nice scenes with Dark and Morgana.

Keep the good writing.

I really enjoyed that: well thought out, good plot, bags of fun and everyone IC. High fives, dude.

Great story! I loved that sweet ending with Morg and Dark :D

Very intense. The Negaverse's Bulba... another good guy ruined by Negaduck; that guy is like cancer.

Keep the good writing.

Just finished reading your story all in one go, and I thoroughly enjoyed every minute. It felt very much like a DW episode to me.

Especially loved:

1) the Doctor Who references. Copyright infringement indeed, heh.

2) the cartoon "physics." You walk the same line as the creators, I felt, which contributed to the "episode" feel.

3) the slight hint of Darkwarrior Duck coming out of Darkwing in the earlier chapter with Bushroot, and the comparison Launchpad made between Negaduck and Darkwing in a foul mood. It just seemed to make the drama have more urgency.

Again, fantastic fic; keep writing well!

'The original name for the project was a Telephone for Assisting Reconnaissance in Dimensions Instead of Space, or TAR-'

Grizzlikov immediately shushed the SHUSH leader with a paw over his beak and looked grimly to Darkwing. 'Lawyers from British BBC broadcasting demanded us seize and desist with acronym. Is mark of trade to them.'

'Oh, right.' Darkwing was sympathetic to the lawyers from his own efforts in maintaining his own image for merchandising.

*falls out of chair laughing as a certain Doctor is splurting out his tea in shock*

has Dr Bellum built any Daleks too? :3

Doctor Who aside, uh oh.

you hear baseball from Gosalyn and you know Something's gonna break, and it's most likely the kind that costs and arm and a leg for good measure...

ah, that's thoughtful of Gosalyn, letting Honker play pitcher to boost confidence. though i don't know the fundamentals of baseball, your input in their play makes it more realistic and enjoying...

wow, Honker breaks something.

a first!

lol at the backwardness of the TARDAT, smaller inside than out, ouch...

and here it starts...

poor gos...

drake's not gonna be happy at all when he wakes up and hears about this...

Whoa! This Bulba is like a super-Robocop!

Excellent job here. Great description of Bulba's 'feelings' and way he sees the world, and major twist with the unexpected battle; his sensors identify Darkwing as Negaduck and he acts the way he would do with the real villain.

Keep the good writing.

I hope Taurus Bulba finds out he's about to kill a good guy & HIS (Darkwing's) daughter.

one major change that you should incorporate into your story is that dialogue goes in DOUBLE QUOTES. Not single. In example...

'What, Gos?' Darkwing asked

I like the story so far. I would like to see what happens next.

What will happen when the Gosalyn of the Negaverse finds out what the Taurus Bulba did to the Gosalyn of Darkwing's world?

'I clobbered some FOWL Eggmen, Honker here used me as a human shield, I woke up in a frilly pink dress, the Friendly Four here told me you're like a superhero legend, and I blew up the Muddlefoots.' Heh, classic. :D

Just like the show was, this fan-fic is both dramatic and full of action, but funny and comical at the same time. I await chapter six. :)

when are you going to put chapter 6 up because i want to know whats going to happen to gosalyn and if darkwing will be able to save her thanks

I can't even pick a favorite scene. This chapter was just fabulous!

Darkwing treating Bushroot like that... shows how much he got affected by Gosalyn's disappearence.

Keep the good writing.