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Trinity Fenton-Phantom
8/20/10 . chapter 5
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I wonder how Iwa is going to react since Naruto looks exactly like his dad.
Immortal-Sacrifice
4/29/08 . chapter 5
NaruHina is so cute!
HalfTangible
2/3/08 . chapter 5
Not bad... not bad at all...
Musette The Vampire
11/2/07 . chapter 5
aw.just when they almost...-dramatic sigh-that sucked...NO!not your story just the..i mean not the plot but the-oh you get it.lol.please contnue.
AnimegirlKiki
10/29/07 . chapter 5
Lol, Good Chapter. Lol, kiki
Krillin Fan
10/28/07 . chapter 5
Ah, more subtle fluff... between almost everyone this time, though. So far the only one's that have yet to have their moments are Shikamaru and Temari, though for good reason, and Ino and Chouji, though I imagine a relationship with them might take a little while due to Ino's... well, to be honest, shallow disposition. I hope she comes around, though.

Oh, and don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. Believe you me, I had the same trouble for a while. If you want, I could always put the word out about this one; y'know, mention it in some of my fics?

P.S. Have you seen any of my works? I can always use another opinion.
AnimegirlKiki
10/18/07 . chapter 4
Heehee, baka, took ya long enough..(lol). Nice flick! Can't wait for more! Lol, kiki
Krillin Fan
10/17/07 . chapter 4
Wow, I got an honorable mention! Cool!

And what do you know, the bonehead finally starts to catch on. (Don't get me wrong, Naruto's cool and all, but sometimes, especially when it comes to Hinata, I just wanna backhand the kid.) Of course, he WOULD atuomatically assume it's her strength at first...

And of course, Ye OldeFox Demon can't resist a chance to mock the kid...
WizKid94
10/14/07 . chapter 3
ooh this is really good. update soon k? please!^-^
Krillin Fan
10/14/07 . chapter 3
Once again, a cool chapter. And once again, Ino simply CANNOT stay out of things. Does this shock anyone?

At any rate, this is coming along nicely. I wonder what's gonna happen when Shikamaru meets up with Temari again, though. For some reason, I find their interaction to be quite funny.
Krillin Fan
10/12/07 . chapter 2
Well, nice to see Shikamaru's as lazy as ever... and that Guy-sensei is still as... vibrant.

Anyways, I especially like the little moment with Naruto and Hinata at the end; cute and funny! Keep up the good work!
Krillin Fan
10/12/07 . chapter 1
Well, this certainly has a bit of potential. It'll be interesting to see where this goes. I'd suggest a couple other parings, but... gess only a few like 'em together, so... But I'll do it anyways. I wouldn't mind seeing added to the pairing list, slight or otherwise: either Saku/Lee or Ino/Chouji. Anyways, like I said, this'll be interesting, so I hope to see more soon.
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