i liked this

wow this was cool. u really described him well

Uh, there was, I think, no point to this? If anyone watches the show, they know Seto.

Now, on to the CC, once again almost every sentence is missing a period, and grammar is dead. No capital names except for Seto, and no commas except after Seto.

All in all, unless this was a poem, clean it up a bit, and maybe it'll pass as fanfiction.

~Qzil.

bribe91, the confused

bribe91, the terrible writer

bribe91, who thinks this is a poem/story/whatever she wants to label it wrongly as

bribe91, the author who seperates the same person into two different personas

bribe91, who stories are on every category I come across

bribe91, the one who makes me want to cut my throat

bribe91, the one who wrote the incredibly stupid "when bulma and vegeta fell in love" or some other nonsense as such, a story that must be burn

BRIBE91 WILL ALWAYS BE A BAD WRITER, BUT HER OTHER PERSONA WILL ALWAYS... wait.. nah, both sides of her problem suck at writing too.

I hate when people contradict themselves so plainly as she did.

This is NOT EVEN poem.

May Kaiba whack you upside your head with his briefcase for writing something that sounds like a poem when it's a pile of shit.

YES! You had a lot of strong points. Seto IS indeed a JERK! but yet misunderstood.

I like it all the way.

You have a unique way to discribe him, I like the last line the most, and I know that kaiba inside differ than the outside. He is a caring person.

Your fiction is absolutely beautiful and honest.

Good idea, I like the whole theme of it and everything

Pretty good, but the all caps title and summary is usually a throw off that annoys many people. I almost didn't read it because of that.

WOW! This is abolutely correct the way you described Seto. I really do feel sorry for him because everyone only sees the hardass but they never see the caring brother that is deep inside afraid to come out. Great Story, Great Job...