 A Lucky Stone 1/26/08 . chapter 1That's adorable! I can guess there are references to the second series that I don't get because I haven't seen it yet... but it's great anyway |
 Darth Bongo 11/21/07 . chapter 1This is very nice. It's simple, but poetic. It is just the right length, any longer and it would have dragged. Good use of repetition enforced by the relatively identical sentence structure. It worked well, in part because the story was so brief. This line "His faith is placed in a cramped apartment that seems too small to even fit their three combined names- Suresh-Parkman-Walker." I particularly liked. It is a great image and it is very subtly funny. |
 MaeLace 10/29/07 . chapter 1This is really sweet, and really true in the way that it anylizes belief. Great story. |
 Jennifer Wand 10/27/07 . chapter 1This was 300 words of awesome. And I agree completely. This *is* what Mohinder believes in.
It's fantastic. |
 alibi2014 10/26/07 . chapter 1This was wonderful. It's both strange and fitting that a story about the supernatural would place more faith in science than in God, and would find love and bonds between family and friends more powerful than... anything else, really. I can definitely see Mohinder in this, and it was a great read. |
 Tanya Reed 10/26/07 . chapter 1 I really liked this. |
 Pawfoot 10/26/07 . chapter 1Aw! This was... well cute isn't the right word, but I'm not sure what else to say. Very enjoyable. |
 etoiledunord 10/26/07 . chapter 1 "He believes in paintings and hiragana and a helix."
Great line. Heartwarming piece. =) |