Oh! This is so sweet. It's been years since you updated, but I'd love it if you would again anyway. :)

your a good writer

Sam character studies are usually very interesting. I think this one is HIGHLY interesting.

Awesome. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

I absolutely loved how Melly believed that Sammy was a good guy, (which he really is). This fic was really good. :D

I adored the flashbacks but the whole Melly being told the tale thing as a parallel didn't seem to flow right, like the continuity wasn't great and sort of confusing. But then again maybe I haven't read the story in a long time. Othwerwise, I think you captured Sam's behaviour brilliantly. Loved it

Oh, *nice*!

And clearly Sam has been doing a bit of protecting while at Stanford - all to the good, of course.

This is really good. i cant wait to read more !

oh, how sweet isn't little Melly. Of course Jessica would be visiting her sister. Adorable and sad

Ahh! Why is this so amazing?

I actually sad-squeed. I haven't done that since the season finale.

This is great. Oh, /Sam/.

Aw...Melly's so sweet. more please!

Love it, love Melly's childish innocence. I love the pretty ring, that's soo sad. I would like more background and details though...that is, if you're going to continue.

omg i love melly! soo much. that sam would go back to protect jess's family makes so much sense.

This is interesting. I was really concerned after the first chapter cause I thought that was it, but now I'm hooked. Is there going to be more?

Great start! I would love it if you continued. We never have gotten to know anything about Jess's family so this is very interesting.