waaaaaaah, I actually cried. reading this chapter

I bawled at the last bit

So tell me if I get this right. Naruto so called friends have been hanging with the woman who has abandon him and their son and the guy with who she has cheat on him ? What a bunch of scums.
Really, with friends like that, who needs enemies ?

Aw hell yeah there is mcdonalds

This is the best naruto fanfic ever espically thr epilougr

when in the office Naruto had put the 3 phots on the dask is the old men and him it 3 when in the old men old hat on him , the old men happy about it ,the 2 is of him and ion be marring and his son too in it ,the 3 is of a frilmy phot his son both the boys step bother and sister in it both Naruto god father and mother in it both Sarkra and ion in it and him too , when on the wall of a paly boy bunny gril and now lord of her couny , now , when then the bounyhuthers pothers of men and woamn he stop and kill off too , when in time the books call the bounyhuther code and lifes and myes he do to made others see the life of bounyhuther had it evil side too , when Naruto was 29 and his son was bore too ,

I thought you said last chapter that all of their friends were out on missions?

Bruh why u gotta make me cry like that. Thats not fair, fuck h for being so damn good at writing this story. Ty for ending it as many just leave good stories with no ending.

Just know one thing it is fanfiction for a reason and personally i read it all the way through and glad the story was finished with a decent ending it kept ne wanting more keep up the good work.

Oh Gods' if Olympus that was awesome. I literally cried at the end, that was just beautiful.

i almost cried reading this chapter

This was the first story ever since I've read from you and I have reread it so many times. This was made at the beginning of your amazing career and people don't understand that this is your first fanfic. This was written when you were one of the biggest authors on the naruto fanfiction and I've loved all of your stories. No matter what anyone says the majority love this story and you as well. Pudgypudge you are my favorite author.

Wow this sucks

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Great idea but the way it's done has flaws.

First of all i think this story would have benefitted from a different start. Even something as small as Hikaru being adopted instead of fathered/mothered by Naruto and Sakura.
Why, you may ask, simple: Because you have a relatively young mother that apparently has no problem what so ever abandoning her 3-4 year old child.
A child that we are then told Sakura had with Naruto because he was the easy choice and there was never actually any love for him.

Now this is hard to swallow already. As a father I would likely do everything in my power to keep the child away from a person like that. Reconciliation would be impossible.
Even for Hikaru who seems like a really intelligent child, has to realize that his mother who doesn't live far from him, doesn't want anything to do with him anymore. As shattering as that might be to someone his age, I don't believe for a second that after being ignored for 3 years he'd just rush back into Sakuras arms because she says: "Sorry lol". Never mind all the adults who are all super okay with Sakura being this collossal waste of living space... the impact of her character would have been greater if we'd seen her work her way up to redemption.

Now what really hit me though, was the fact that your story plans on having Naruto leave his son behind in the care of Ino... and at this point i feel like you are just trying to break this boy. So his mother left because 'Kyaaa Sasuke-kun!', and his father is gonna fuck off too now telling him: "Yeah this woman who I've been dating for a couple of days will take care of you, Imma be a King! bye!"

If the foxes cared for his family so much, shouldn't they find a way for Naruto to remain with the little family he has for as long as possible? Even if that just means until Hikaru becomes a Ninja and can take care of himself?

These are my thoughts, if you ever write again, maybe they can be helpful.

Souen

wow loved this story it made me cry a few times thsnk u