Great story a shame you stopped it.

The trick to call an attack and counter the counter is quite nice and does not appear in many battle (which is a shame). Thanks for the chapter :)

I hope this never gets taken down unless something dumb happens like FFN going pay access where writers also fave to pay a per word fee for keeping the fics online.

So many parts of your subplots that I wanted to see. SG-1, Nodoka facing the Senshi reveal, The wedding, Amazons catching up with Cologne and finding they are working against Uranus and Neptune. Ryouga meeting Small Lady by poorly timed traveling. Kasumi and Tofu's relationship, Genma's plotting to get a new retirement plan. The growth of Anything Goes into a working real Dojo in Nerima, If Makoto will hook up with MuTse.

Now to go look at the fic you mentioned hop it is at least half as good as this.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Figures A big part of why I went to the trouble of reading this even though it was marked discontinued and complete was that I really wanted to see if you would get SG-1 involved once obvious alien craft started showing up like the dark Circus.

You were off on your vehicle order. Yes Haruka had a Blue car in this episode. The Yellow car was its replacement. The Senshi didn't leave much left of the old blue one. Kinda thought this chapter would have at least finished with the Daimon here.

Considering how many encounters there have been with the Senshi. Really after the Small Lady/Dark Moon events and how Grampa Hino ended up at events with the reformed time traveling sisters. It is more likely that Rei would give up all interest in music and manga than it is that Grampa is still in the dark about the inner Senshi.

As if anything would get this involved without stray thoughts giving you side tracks.

Strange thing about the Time Gate. It is a 1 sided flat object. It is flat but no matter where you stand to look at it you are facing its front side. "Gates" is more or less a technicality since it can be locked closed.

I wonder if anyone has thought to do a relief art book for Sailor Moon creatures. They could even use textures that would connect to a key that would let someone who couldn't see it be able to work out a general idea of how it was inked in show.

Inspired by Braile and that scene in Robinhood Men in Tights where Blinkin is definitely checking out some soft curves in the bathroom after the castle is taken.

Would there be a big enough market for overly thick paged books like that?

So the Ki blast left Kasumi's soul linked to Ranma's Ki. I wonder what you plan to use that link for.

Too bad they couldn't find someone else with more than average Ki. Or even Ki infused foods like that Perfect Okonomiyaki that Ukyo went to try in one of the series episodes.

Guess Cologne has no way to learn any Ki draining techniques to supplement her own reserves.

Violin notes. You normally let tension off the bow when storing it for any appreciable length of time. You usually have to get it back to taught but not overtight. Then you want to check how well it is rosened drawing it across the strings usually won't make a clear note unless it is well coated. Even if you do everything else perfectly. Basically to get things going as shown Setsuna probably had to pop in and make sure the Violin was perfectly ready to go just before Ranma came in to look for an instrument. Even if your tuning pegs are perfect they also tend to slip over time. Nothing that would show up in a day or two but it also hints that someone was keeping that Stradivarius copy ready to play.

If the characters settled down nicely and were kind to you they'd stop living and your stories would get dull.

Beware what you wish for. And may your muse always be well armed to prod you to new works ;)

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Thank you for a great story so far.
I understand wanting to keep the story consistent and I respect you for that.
I have read many incomplete stories that just stop with no explanation.
Hope to read more of your stories.

I liked the SG stuff it was funny.