My hands are clapping on this storyline. It is different; it gives more of an understanding of Mick and Josef and being Vampires - it also shows Josef with more awareness than Mick, and you got that one quite right.

You mention about Beth and the pull of Mick St. John. You also got that one right.

Chilling and very very well written. Loved the first one especially, such a distopia!

I adore your crisp style in this story, the excellent characterization of each little vignette. They are photographs and yet rather like video diaries, revealing a lot while being intensely focused. I think you grasped Josef's cynicism about the world very well as well as Mick's precarious honor.

awesome. and i love the ones with mick and josef.

Dark and gritty and beautiful. Well done!

These were like appetizers ! Or should I say appeteasers ? Wonderful little bites ! I would like the whole meal , please ! Especially story number 2 . Keep on writing ...these were great !

Wow! Dark & fascinating (or should I say 'darkly fascinating')? I'll admit, a few words that I don't admit to publicly knowing slipped out whilst reading these (or more specifically, whilst reading the 3rd one) - but nice work. They are greatly OOC (& bitchy besides), but then that is the whole point isn't it? But for sheer writing quality & originality, I found it riveting!

Excellent work!

- Diana