I was so hoping o'wan's adopted dad would be bail ;)

A wonderful story, thank you for writing and sharing it!

I really enjoyed this story. Obi-wan is my favorite Star Wars character. :)

Aww..sweet and mushy. Need something salty to offset it, but I like sweet and salty :). Good story, you have a way in your writing of grabbing our emotions along with the characters (particularly one favorite character, that is Obi-Wan Kenobi, and you come up with such good ideas for stories, too! Great job. ~Obi's Mom

favorite again And I so love happy endings.

aw, i love happy endings! ') great story. i like o'wan. cutie :D

I'm not normally a fan of "young" obi fics, but something about yours dragged me in, and I thorougly enjoyed reading your story. It was well told and captivating, with a wonderful and happy ending.

In trying for the "well-rounded" critique that helps us writers improve and grow, I will offer that there are a few grammatical errors and editing mistakes that could help the overall "readability" of the story, and the flow was sometimes disturbed by these small flaws, however, a lot of them are easily overlooked by an author who knows the story so well, inside and out. I would suggest a good beta reader to help catch and point out these things. Be leary of the ones who just want to be the first to read a new story and look for the ones who will offer constructive critiscim and critique. It's hard, as a writer, to always hear suggestions, but in the end, it makes the story perfect, and that makes it worth it - to you, the writer, not just the reader.

Best of luck to you! And thank you for a great read. All-in-all, very well done!

AW! :D That explains how he knows Dex so well!

not bad but in te movie swe3 where is obi-wan's bother?

Aww, what a cute ending! Obi with spiky hair makes me laugh!

God bless!

~Szepilona10~

it's good! LOVE it!

I definately love how the story is progressing :D Obi's life is starting to look up a bit more XD! I can't wait to see whats in store for the upcoming chapters so keep up the great work and update when you can looking foward to it :3!

Aw, this left me with that mushy gushy feeling. Loved it! Aha. I remember reading this story on another site but I really enjoyed reading it again. I wish you would write a sequel and have the story flashforward a bit and see how having a brother who is the son of Bail turns out, and the relationship between him and Obi-wan. It would be neat to see.

Awesome story, you did a fine job. Wish you'd write more.

LOVED IT! The PERFECT ending for the PERFECT story. It was mushy but the GOOD kind of mushy. It showed the love between two brothers and that they had both found their perfect place in the world and that they would be happy and contented in those lives. Thanks and keep up the good work. Love, Shi-Ahn Jinn

AAWW! I love happy endings, I just wish I could write them... A lovely story, please keep writing!