Reviews for The Eleventh Hour
heredia chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
"hardly pictured perfect" - he have anything which could be wished, he was loved by everyone, he taunted tortured and raped people who wasnt as lucky as him
Zeltz chapter 25 . 6/1/2013
Heya!
I was just wondering if you were ever going to continue this fic?
It's so good! I want to know how it'll end for the three! Poor Squall n Zack.
Please! You've gotta finish it! Pretty please with a candied Genesis on top?
AshEd chapter 25 . 2/28/2012
I do love this. I believe I read this before a couple of years ago, now I returned to re-read and see if there had been any updates. Alas, to my sorrows, there hasn't been. Genesis as an arrogant fullblooded vampire suits him down to the ground and I still love him.

My father is an Urmstonian, a Manc, and therefore a Lanc. But hullo, did I hear "Somerset"? That's where I've lived the majority of my life. Weston-super-Mare at the mo. Lovely corner of the world, Somerset, and indeed the West Country in general.

It's interesting to read the stories from authors in the UK.

Please pay a visit back to this fiction. I love it dearly. It is well worth continuing. But don't stress, ok?
lasilintu chapter 25 . 9/3/2010
Because I know how much you like reviews... Here it comes!

I took me about two days to read this story this far, and I enjoyded everymoent of it! Though I'm not used to this pairing, or threesome in general X) I has been great story and I'm eager to read more.

You have good style to write and it's pleasant to read. Only thing that bugged me while reading this fic was that sometimes when you changed the one you wrote about it was a bit unclear because there was no larger cap between the paragraphs.

Otherwise: Great fic and keep going!I want to know what happens in the end.. ;)
childrenofeomund chapter 10 . 3/27/2010
I absolutely love this story: I can actually see your writing grow as it goes on.

lol, I would love some GenesisxCloud, and then Aerith can get with someone else, like. . .Tifa XD
Queen-of-Sussness chapter 25 . 11/11/2009
Where. Is. The. Next. Chapter?

-glare- huh?

It's been over a year since you last updated - why? You'd been doing so well!

You need to sit down at your computer, consult the muses/plot bunnies and WRITE! -cracks whip- Now!

Please.

If for nothing else, then at least for my sanity - I go insane if I don't get the end of a story :)

Now UPDATE SOON!

QoS
Haku78 chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
i really enjoyed reading your story and i can't wait to find out what happens next
Hikarikurai24587 chapter 25 . 5/19/2009
This is such a cool fanfic, I wonder what happens to everyone. By the way who is Cloud getting together with in this fanfic?
BPWNR chapter 25 . 4/13/2009
Oh, man. This hit my vampire kink in just the right way.

My perma-boner aside, I love the way you wrote this. There were grammar errors and a few typos, but those are easily forgiven. Some passages and sentences are going to be stuck in my head for a long time. It was just... BEAUTIFUL. X]

Also~, I might be the only one to think so, but the intermission was my favorite part. Genesis' obsession and Squall's devotion were absolutely adorable, totally omnomable. And the atmosphere you created for them was so rich and enthralling. I loved it. I loved every part of it to itty bitty pieces.

And I'm so glad I don't have to kill you for the cocktease in chapter 6. You more than made up for it later, I promise. I still might have to kill you for not updating for months. What's up with that, seriously. It's going to make me sad forever.

BUT ALL IN ALL, FANTASTIC JOB.

I'm glad I spent the time I did reading this.
Cha-Fujimura chapter 25 . 12/23/2008
I've read a lot of your Seph/Gen stuff on LJ, and I love it. I love and am totally wrapped up in this story now. This chapter actually made me cry. I can't wait for the next one.

Poor Gen, Poor Squall, Poor Zack. ;-;
FreeFallingForward chapter 25 . 12/8/2008
This is so sad! I can't believe Clarice had the nerve to take Genesis awayy! O

Umm... I'm actually quiet scared of what Zack's planning on doing... He better not do anything stupid or else it would make both me and Squall very very sad. '[

I love this story, so you realy have to update soon, mkayy! D
KitaraStrife chapter 25 . 12/4/2008
Okay, first of all, how ironic is it that for the majority of reading this chapter the song "Nemo" by Nightwish was playing on my iTunes on my computer, then immediately jumped into "One Week" by Barenaked Ladies? (-.-) Especially when said latter of the two songs - (that sentence did NOT make any sense!) - just happens to start out with the words "It's been one week since you looked at me" and I just HAPPENED to be reading the final part of the chapter? UGH! {head/DESK!} It's quite annoying to me actually.

Anyways, I REALLY hate Clarice right now. SHE TOOK GENESIS AWAY FROM SQUALL AND ZACK, THE B-CH! (DX)
KitaraStrife chapter 24 . 12/4/2008
I knew it! I KNEW Clarice was a character to be hated! (XD) HOORAY! At least I can tell what characters I should be hating from those that I should be liking and/or loving in a story, unlike how I keep choosing to root for the losing team while watching videos on YouTube from Metrocon's 2008 Cosplay Chess Matches. (DX) Oh well. STILL LOVE THIS STORY!
KitaraStrife chapter 23 . 12/3/2008
I'm not liking Genesis's mummy at all right now. I think she's a witch with a "b" instead of a "w" and that she just wants to kill Squall and Zack. I WON'T LET HER DO THAT! ...This is one HAWT 3-some pairing you've got going on here if I'm saying sh-t like that! (XD)
KitaraStrife chapter 21 . 12/3/2008
I knew the main Train Station in London, but not the main airport. Heh, ya learn new things every day! YAY! (XD)

P.S. It's pretty obvious how I learned the main Train Station in London, but for those too stupid, drunk off their butts, or lazy to think of it, I learned about King's Cross Station through J. K. Rowling's "Harry Potter" series! (;P)
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