WHY WOULD YOU STOP THERE!

I would love to see more of that, I drooled so much and I longed for more, but I guess my imagination will make me happy.

Why do I have this sick feeling in my stomach that tells me Roxas chose two? I REALLY hope I'm wrong. Chapter two? Pretty please with a cherry on top?

DUDE. i need moar. a chapter two. your so great.

So...fucking...confused!

I'm gonna have to assume he chose number two, considering Roxas tends to be the...stupidly irrational types...

Then again, I could be wrong... I kinda hope I'm wrong anyways. I know if I wrote a story like this, poor little Roxie would have picked number two.

Whatever. great story.

hugs, kisses,cranberries, and cowlick fairies

wait... that was the end? NOOOOOO! pretty please write MOAR!

wait... that was the end? NOOOOOO! pretty please write MOAR!

TEWG: AWW, MAN! HE CHOSE OPTION NUMBER TWO! DAMN IT! RIP ROXAS.

801: Damn, left at a cliffhanger. Axel... you're a meanie-head. *throws an orange* and you, too *throws another orange at you*.

TEWG & 801

Oh boy, I sense an epic tickling and pillow fight battle.

Nah not really. I'm not that innocent.

Oh boy.

You! YOU! YOOOUUUUUUUU!

must continue.

evil person. you jsut stopped. and i sat there like :O "thah'sall?"

you meanie

CONTINUE. or, i guess i can let my imagination get the better of me. er, ahem. but either way, it's still awesome

TEASE! how can you just stop there! *flails violently* no no no! you must continue! if you dont ill, virtually abuse you.. ABUSEABUSEABUSEABUSE! thats an example of the abuse ill send you if you dont continue!

After reading The Things They Carried, I am getting rather tired of ambiguous things. Or just cliffhangers. But since horror stories are naturally like that, I'm gonna guess that Roxas chose option one.

Haha, knowing our cute little Roxas, he probably said something along the lines of "fuck you" and Axel interpreted it as numbero deux. But then again, from his reactions before, perhaps he'd like to live? Either way, Axel gets to have his wicked way with Roxie, and the sadist in me is cackling at the possibilities. I'd love to have a sequel to this, or maybe even just a slight indications as to which way he chose, but I have to admit that ending it here is a very effective way of doing things.

Oh come on! Add a Second! PLEASE! Do us all a favor!

Cause this was just awesome!

-dEmOn-

A-Are you going to write it? O_O

Oh my gosh this is amazing. Mundane things such as correct grammar (what a nice change!) aside, this was beautifully written! I love your writing style. Nice job!

please continue soon!