I really liked this! I have never really thought of the flock being grounded angels, but it sense! I loved this and keep up the good work!

Isn't that talent a little too similar to Nudge's? Well, I guess it's not the same, but it kind of seems to similar, in my opinion.

But that was pretty cool. :) Great job.

natalie

thats good please continue

O.o cool. T.T (

This was a great story, and my favorite chapter too.

I like to think that it's God talking to Max. My reasons for thinking this is that the Voice is capitalized, he says that he loves Max more than anyone else, he guides her to all the places she needs to go and provides for her, (i.e. The Institute and the Card)and that he doesn't tell her straight out what she needs-excuse me-wants to know. God only gives us what we can handle when we can handle it, and if you notice in the Bible he asks a lot of rhetorical questions. Also the bit about doing the right thing and not being right-also in the form of a question.

Keep up the good work!

I think Fang and Max would be the cutest couple! Too bad I havent read the 2nd or the third yet! I need IT! Fang and Iggy, in my head, are so cute! I love them! So I'm... um insane!

Love it! Can't wait to read the "2 years later" part! Plus, I like the idea on Fang's power.

thats a pretty spankin' cool power - way to go! plus also, you should totally do a 'next chapter' - DUH!

xox

niobe

who is not steve

...or henry.

I think i'll give fang a power sometime. Can't Nudge kinda see the things in the past? But that's only when she touches things and can only see what happened with that thing.

Awesome chap. Sort of bites on religious people though; like, offending those guys on that God bit. But whatever.

Pretty neat stuff here. ;]

I sadily, can't think of anything else to say. I'm trying...

I'll just say I'm speechless. I can't think of how to describe it.

I can't wait to read the sequel. :D

aw... thats cute. fang is so my favorite character in the book and its kinda cool that he can talk to god like that. i like the whole "i am the past" thing too.. thats kinda cool

aah! can't wait for the sequel! I want to know what's in store, dum dum dum du.^^

I really liked Fang's prayer, t'was very sweet =]

that was very awesomeful.

i had started writing something like this... never finished, never typed, never posted.

yours is probably better anyway.

update soon!

cool