 Leap of fate 2/24/03 . chapter 24Aww very sweet chapter.Dont leave it so long to update, get the next one out real soon!
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 Acetoorion 2/24/03 . chapter 24Hurrah! *Does happy dance* I've been waiting for an update! But I understand the whole RL thing! This was a good chapter, I liked the interaction with Xavier, hmm, maybe I'm going soft, but the romantic twist with him and Gabrielle was sweet! Ah well, be proud, it's very rare that I'll admit to enjoying romance! Love the rest of the fic too, Action/Drama is great, keep it up! |
 Katie 2/22/03 . chapter 4 The story is pretty good, but logan's claws aren't part of his mutation, his healing fator is. So, he would be able to use his claws. Just mentioning. |
 Dizzy Hwin 2/22/03 . chapter 24Nice chapter, if not a little short. I like how your showing some more of the humane side of BT. I think maybe u should some how get BT to let Ororo communicate with one of the other x-men, let them know she's alive. Well plez update soon! |
 Acetoorion 1/11/03 . chapter 23This si good, I wish you'd update more often! I like the plot with Sotrm and Black Thunder too. |
 Rhapsody81 1/10/03 . chapter 23 i went searching for this story and lo-and-behold, you updated! that does my heart good and lookey, it was a chapter featuring Ororo and Black Thunder.. fabulous! i so love most of your stories! keep up the great work! Maybe i'll get inspired to write again.
-Rhaps! |
 Leap of fate 1/5/03 . chapter 23Great chapter, its been a long time since an update, get a new one up soon!
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 Arial 12/1/02 . chapter 22 Oh God that was soooo sad you are an amazing writer please please update this story real soon.
I really wanna know what happened to Ororo all we know are from BT's thoughts.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 Ororis Storm 11/8/02 . chapter 22 post the next chapter soon! I want to see more storm! ^^ |
 rhapsody81 nsi 11/7/02 . chapter 22 wow, i feel like i haven't read this story in forever...
i like it just as much as now as i did before. I can't wait to read another chapter and i hope it comes soon (and Ororo's in it)... ;) |
 anon 11/6/02 . chapter 22 Keep going! |
 Acetoorion 10/27/02 . chapter 21Please write some more, this is good and very well written if english isn't your first language. Keep it up! C |
 Buckster 10/19/02 . chapter 21Great story so far. Can't wait to see what trouble you can get Jubilee in. |
 anon 10/19/02 . chapter 21 cant wait for more storm! |
 Dizzy Hwin 10/14/02 . chapter 21OMG Great story! Its so sad, I just hope that there will be a happy ending, well as happy as a story like this can end :)
Just one question : If Logans mutations are stopped with the neck-thingy, why cant he use his claws? They aren't part of his mutation cuz they were given to him? |