Oh warm fuzzies! You write children so well - like there adult counterparts, but just that little less inexperienced at life. Enjoyed this so much!

So cute. I love the young character stories :o)

this is so adorable 3! all the characters were portrayed extremely well, and i love how you described miles as such a prude B)

i hope i could do more than just a review and a favourite, and i hope this fic gets more attention than it has now, too... that's all i can do, sadly.

keep on writing!

Hum, hey, I'm back to bother you. ;

But it just isn't fair that this story never got more than seven comments, so I had to review... Even more so since I love stories picturing those three characters back when they were nine. They're simply adorable! (I failed to mention this for "Struggling Against Gravity", but that part with the sour bread was absolutely priceless, especially Phoenix's comments about Gregory Edgeworth being some kind of modern superhero. XD Looks like Larry had similar fantasies.)

It's sad to think that the three boys probably won't see one another again in a very long time after that, if this trial Miles is going to see really is the one his father had against von Karma... But the anecdote was refreshing none the less. Figures Miles would be this picky even with borrowed clothes. XD Poor Phoenix, he really went out of his way to help.

I even managed to feel sort of bad for Larry. Poor kid can't do anything right, it seems, but he did have good intentions. But well, Miles's "thank you" in the end seemed partly directed at him, I suppose that made him feel better. But the effect certainly was nowhere near as radical as it was to Phoenix. _

I especially liked the allusion to the paper cranes, though. That part of the third game was simply hilarious! And of course Miles didn't really need von Karma to become a perfectionist...

Some remaining typos like double "it"s, but besides that an amazing one-shot, going straight to my favourites. Thanks for writing it!

Nadra

Honestly one of the best one-shots I've read. Very detailed but not so intricate that it bores me. The story plot was cute and the characters weren't OOC. Good job. I look forward to another collaboration between you two.

This is an absolutely beautiful piece. The grammar was correct, the word composition was thoughtful and it all had a smooth a lighthearted flow to it. And to top it off- the entire story was perfectly in-character!

This is definitely one of my favorite one-shots of all time. Thank you.

you did it great as usually... you bring their emotion good... and their personality.. i love it, it's really cute, too...

Aww..this one shot was so cute! I can definately imagine Miles acting that way as a kid. XD

Good job, and keep it up! Hope you can update "Struggling Against Gravity" soon!

Aw, that was so cute! _ Total parallel to chapter five, too. :P Keep up all of the awesome Edgey/Phoenix fluff! D

Oh my gosh, this is the best kid fic I've read. (I'm a sucker for those, really.) I love how everyone was in character and the squeezy friendship between those three made me giggle.

"When something smells, it's usually the Butz" alright.

LOL. This was extremely well written. It made me go warm inside! ) Do write some more!