WHAT! ed your breaking up with him! i understand that he should have said something more apropriate but still...

(i liked how he broke it off though)

All you care about is yourself.

You fucking bastard you!

Just leave me the hell alone,

because we are so fucking through

he should have said i love you too or something just as romantic

wow i would have never thought that ed would read something like a poetry book but either way it makes things more interesting.

i just love the poems

i liked your poem!

Those two are really stubborn... XD Good job and update soon.

Take care. TenshiShanai.

...How wil Roy resond to that. And good luck Russell, poor guy's going to be hunted now.

*rises hand for hawkeye shooting mustang*

Another good chapter. I liked Ed's letter and conversation with Al. You can feel some of his pain. Al is so cute and funny. I liked the Ed's poem. It was good. I wish I had had a version of that for an ex. Wonder if Russel knows that he (Russel is gay)...if not what a shock but then again he was the 2nd Ed Elric...he deserves it! I liked your message..it seems slightly poetic. Cannot wait for Roy's reply. See Roy...Hawkeye is always right!

I'd like to join the study stuff... I like Russell very much... he can make a flower to blossom... laughs...

Figuratively... uhm... better let's make it a fact... Mustang is going to torch that memorandum to ashes...

Now let's see what the 'master at work' will do after this... bye

nice work i liked it alot, i haven't been in fanfic in a while in fear i might come to a realy dump story you know the ones that have no plot no catch and change the charators into disperate house wives. so i found your little story...very nice, love the poemtry, i think i'll read another story. (homefully not a dumb one.)

In this life i see lies

Of a never ending web

How can i cut the tred

If there is no end?

It doesn't mater if their died...

it's not the best I've been trying to finish it, can you help? i know it's a lot to ask but maybe if you're bored it'll help pass time and make a smile go on your face if not, oh... well. I tried my best.

Oh, poor Edo... T_T I just love this story more and more! Can't wait for the update!

Oh dear...stupid Roy.

Ya know, this story really reminds me of one of my favorite songs ever, "Almost Lover". It's getting sad. Can't wait to read Roy's.

aw!poor roy!yeah for edward!russel(sp?) asked him out!XD

Loved it! I must say, this amuses me to no end. Please continue it really soon. Great job!