This was awesome. You nailed it. Thank you so much for writing this. Well thought out. Too many don't think about the details. You got 'em. You know if you wanted to write a Stargate story with Janet as the star, I wouldn't mind. :-)

Thank You **HUG**

John Stone

Nope, it's not an ordinary life at that! LOL!

Oh my goodness, Lacey! I just found this and love it already. I needed something to read tonight. I'll update again after I'm done. See you on tvg! ~ Kath

There are far few stories like this, that start from the very humble beginings such as this one, that you have so cleverly spinned. Especially from Moya's side of the story. Yes, she definitely was afraid to be alone, but to literly flush out the enemy has a new meaning for Moya. Those little DRD's were a little scary, escpecially in persuassion, and the other now appreciate those little things being around. I'm glad Pilot was able to be revived, but I missed out on how Zhaan, knew what to do. I don't think that was explained how. Anywhow, I hope this is not the end of this story. It begs for more. :D

Well, I'm surprised the soldier wasn't relieved to see them after being tortured by DRDs! LOL!

Oh! Who is it? Who is it? This is getting really good. I like that you had the DRD write a message to John. Nice new touch. Thank you.

John Stone

I've always loved the way Moya can communicate with the crew through the DRDs. Poor pilot though. Hope he's okay. Great chapter.

**HUG**

John Stone

Poor crew of Moya. When it rains it pours. Loving it. Thank you

John Stone

Nope, not a good sign if their escape depends on Sparky!

This is brilliant. I love this story. Not crazy about those who are nit-picking it to death. Just keep on as you're going. Thank You

John Stone.

Interesting so far get more chapters out soon.

So far this is very interesting.

A few things though, it's Zhaan not Zhann, also it's peacekeeper not peace keeper. And unless your story is during season 4, which I doubt since Zhaan's there, Pilot usually refers to John as Commander not John.

Other than that, I just want to know what is going to happen to Rygel ;)

It's not bad. But a little slow. It needs more action...but then again, I suck at writing and have no business telling anyone how to write. So in any case, I can't wait for the next chapter.

That sounds like Aeryn and D'Argo, tying up Rygel!

I like it, it's like watching from the begining, looking forward to more.