I CRIED! That was so sad!

This is so beautiful, so tragic.. you made me love this pairing too .. . You also made me more sympathetic towards Near, somehow..XD

Wonderful!

ps. I love that song*the ending of six feet under, still brings tear from my eyes*, it's alone tragic enough .

this was very good, it made me cry

Wow (OO) I Felt completly in love. Nice description of the scene. I never knew how to put Mello's hand on Near's neck with such angst ant than turned it into a delicate hug. Sooo cool... Mello's whril of emotions is very nice ^^.

Thanks for this fiction. You made someone very happy today :)

ah, wow

I don't usually go for MelloXNear, but it sorta wasn't really...

it was more MelloXLXNear but without the L, if that makes any sense at all...never mind, it was really good

Wow. That's a little bit demented, actually. It's pretty great. I mean, Near's character seems a bit off, but you hit Mello on the dot, and I like how screwed up it is that they're both only thinking of L. It's clever.

Good job!

That was hauntingly tragic. I myself is a MelloNear fangirl, and never considered that their relationship just could be that way. They would work on the case simply because their unsaid, silent love for L. God, you've teared down my heart, really, and I just couldn't sit down peacefully in front of the computer right now to finish my Biology essay, because... duh, it's awfully sad. I feel like my inner ego is crying inside -weeps-. Poor Mello and Near. I do pity them for being not able to turn away from such past obsession -hugs them-. Well, just my two cents. Thank you for this lovely piece of work! Keep improving, ne?

Regards,

SheilaLuv

That was quite an incredible piece of writing! The descriptions, and the ways of conveying the emotions in the story completely drew me in.

That rocked =)

I cried T_T

That was ah-mah-zing 8DD

words cant describe. :)

i loved it when Near was crying; it shows depth.

LOVE.

so-so good idea...very heart breaking i just feel like it's missing some key charecter traits.

is this breathe me by sia? i was just curious

-sobs-

This story gives me stomach pains.

Not the omg-what-is-this-filth stomach pains.

More like the heart-wrenching-almost-crying-someone-give-me-a-hug-and-a-box-of-Kleenex kind of pains.

Aw. No! L can't die! I won't allow him to! I will sacrifice myself! L! Very cute and sad! I loved it!