This was really good! It was amazingly written and really sweet.

very sweet:)

beautiful. absolutely beautiful and sexy and touching.

cute _

i love the kinda breakingness between dialogue and prose, its very different.

Wow. That was absolutely gorgeous.

The way the text jumped around from thought to description to dialogue... That was just pro. And that says nothing of the content! I mean, comparing sex to praying is so clever, and it doesn't sound so good when you say it like that exactly xD, but the way *you* did it was stunning. No joke. I felt moved after reading that.

beautiful. did you come up with this out of expirence, or was it just an idea? because i've felt that way every time i'm with m girl, and this simply brought tears to my eyes. which ever way you came up with this, i am amazed. thank you.

aww!

cute!

write

more

plz!

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Wow. Short, but so, so good. Damn. You're a really wonderfull author. Authoress...? Eh. Anyway. I really liked it, especially how you crafted their relationship in so few words, but with more feeling than a lot of MattxMello writers. (What are you talking about when you say you can't write MM?) Yes, so...awesome job with this.

YES. YES! EPITOME OF TRULY CANNON (well... IC anyway) M&M.; PERFECTION! YOU NOW CLAIM FAVOURITE AUTHOR-SHIP WITH YOUR-YOUR - YOUR YOU-NESS. O.O

wonderful! very expressive and creative I like it! _

M. Beautiful.

I think it was romantic and ten kinds of kick ass. Loved it. It was well written, the plot was short and sweet, and I put off homework to read it because it was so worth it.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

That's all I have to say.

Wait, are you saying that Matt agreed that Mello would never be done paying for his crimes? Geez, woman, Matt's reality-harsh here. I suppose that's how he is in real life, though, huh? Ah, well.