this story was truly something else

If you're still updating this, you should put the changes of pov in bold to make the readers aware of who's perspective the section is.

Interesting that you choose to make her 15. So she'll be an undeveloped woman child for eternity.

I'm all in... (unable to login on my phone). "(

Hahah so I was right, Bella is just a stupid little bitch with issues

Below acts like there's this huge master plan except the master plan is to simply be annoying

For " knowing all" she sure doesn't know shit!
And. These games? Are they really games? Or is she just a stupid manipulative little cunt with mommy and daddy issues? Her pissing people off is a "game"? If she knew everything like she said she would have known Edward was coming g back and she would also know that she's a stupid fuck. She would also know that she could just walk into a huge fire and kill herself

Bella goes on and on about Edward ruined everything... Um...how? Wasn't her plan to leave and put herself into foster care and eat humans...? Well go ahead you fucking idiot! What a great plan! Lol this is one of the dumbest stories I've ever read! Bella is a stupid little cunt, Edwards a idiot, Carlisle's is annoying...

Like Bella couldn't just say, call me Bella? Seriously? Bella says she's perfect at being a vampire yet hates it? Why not just kill herself? Instead of all. This weird anger directed at Carlisle? She's annoying,whiny and kinda want to kill her

Bella's a fucking brat, how about instead of blaming Carlisle she just walks into a fucking fire?

AMAZING! I loved the way you showed just how twisted Bella was. I felt I could really understand her games and hate. This was incredible.

Ooh, I love this, but I want to know the ending!

I fully understand. I will enjoy whatever u do along the way.

Interesting. Thanks for sharing.

This was good and definitely different. Happy that I stumbled upon it and got the chance to read it.