oh...my...gosh...that was an unbelievably good job...wow...

One of the most in-character fics I've read so far. Kept very well to Stephanie's writing style too. Keep it up! ^^

wow. that was really good.

the way you write amazes me!

it's true.

you make lemons become something way more than just -smut.

amazing. you only have one option. become a writer :)

I absolutely loved this. I am a huge fan of the twilight series and have been anticipating this forthcoming scene. Wonderful writing and I hope SM's version is just as powerful!

Amazing work! You are a VERY talented author!

Well that certainly left me feeling a little warm round the edges. What I want to know is how you do it, write like this I mean, is it from experience or from romance novels or what cause I always struggle with making it sound real. Anyway that was amazing, I really loved it.

Luv Emz x

Aw!

That was so sweet!

You wrote Edward's POV incredibly well!

Ahh!

I hope to see more of that!

WOW, very nice. Well done indeed. ;P

'Twas a little porny, but handled well overall.

Brava! Beautifully written! This was so...peacful and mellow. I rather enjoyed it. You did well, it wasn't too dirty nor too childish. My congrats to you and your amazing writing ability. Once again, you captured them perfectly.

-Jessi

that was very sweet, not "insert some word" at all. haha.

-mc

Definitely one of the most well written, passionate, in character, and absurdly brilliant lemons out there.

Thanks for writing this - it was fantastic.

Amaizingly well done, love was palpable and somehow there's passion between the lines and made the whole story erotic and not vulgar as others lemons. Love it!

Rose :D

i really like it in e's point of view. i read b's but e's good too.

so sweet. so not dirty. this is a pear. not a lemon.